Between Me and the Sun

[glaenconer]

Whiskey Dream

I cain’t believe this’s really happenin’.  Got a be a dream.  All I wanted was ta feel his hand on my pecker just once while I wrang it out under the blanket.  Hopin’ so hard he wouldn’t wake up.  Knowin’ the risk I took.  Thought he’d whup me for sure when he jumped up all growly, but he just kind a squinted at me, all sleepy-

Comments

in the moment

[ellenlj]

think I broke a sweat... nicely imagined moment - feels masculine and abashed and disbelieving and aroused

cool!

thanks

Ellen

[gnashsang]

holy shit this is so great - jack's POV of this scene is rawkin!!!

*growly <---- awesome ...and spit for grease. the bull busted gate. *ded*

god, i would pay jake to narrate this and put it on audio CD. seriously.

btw i checked your icons. garage and purplehaze slay me.

omg, i'm talking like a slasher... ;)

[glaenconer]

It feels a bit odd trying to put myself into the body of a nineteen year old boy from a harsh rural life, in his head, trying to feel what he felt and imagine what he thought of it all, but it is compelling. Not only Jack, but all the characters. I confess, I lean more heavily on the film (which I should by all rights be able to call "Oscar winning") when I gush forth my stream of consciousness impressions, because the visuals are so haunting. Every scene in it is indelibly recorded in my mind's eye.

I adore your idea of having Jake read this little burst. And what does it matter if we talk like slashers. At least we'll be able to understand one another. Your Jack icon looks as if were done by Van Gogh or one of his contemporaries. Or perhaps I'm a prententious ass?

[gnashsang]

well you did a great job. oscar winning is right, and what inspiration it stirs up in all of us. amazing... i agree about the visuals of the movie, and the emotion too. how can something that's affected us so much not serve to become an outlet for more love.

the slash lexicon,,, guh, ded, slay, heartshot, seems alien to me. but after reading comments on LJ i've become partial to some. i don't usually like "kills" or slay or ded.. but sometimes they're perfect for the mood.

LOL -- the icon is pic *ass* o, a favorite of mine.