Long way from Conway (27 part 1/?)unpublicguyOctober 25 2010, 00:40:42 UTC
before I comment on the bad stuff that you put in this chapter, might as well I start comment on the happy stuff first....
so I desperately wish that I can transfer to Ben school right now and be his classmate, his lunch friend, his all stuffs since he still don't has any companion for now.(LOL) *make my wish come true, writer...LOL...you're the fairy in this story anyway....*
"Lunch next," Ben said with a funny grin on his face. He isn't that bad when he's not trying to plot to kill you, Kris thought to himself as he looked at the next period.- HOLD ON! are you just staring at MY Ben??? (since when Ben is mine? LOL. I don't know)....put your sight on your man mister, Ben is mine.lalalala
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Why do I feel like Adam did after the AMA's? :PglambertrockOctober 25 2010, 20:05:01 UTC
Okay, before I go on to address your little rant, I'd like to say thanks for being an awesome reader and commenting even after I put some drama (ooooooooooooooh so flippin scary -_-) into a story. I'm getting pay back for me hurting Kris because all day his voice has been in my head going "why did you do that?". ALL DAY lol. I just hate how some people will stray from the drama (you and saar are the only guys who have commented so far and I'm going through this whole 'see, that's what happens when you write stuff that isn't fluffy and happy' right now that I hate. Any help or advice? lol Just, thanks for commenting and being awesome
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You rock =)glambertrockOctober 25 2010, 19:43:32 UTC
I know and all today in the back of my head the little Kris voice was saying "this is gonna bite you in the butt missy" and I literally was just so sad I hurt him! LOL
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Re: You rock =)glambertrockOctober 25 2010, 20:19:49 UTC
It will =) Promise!
Yeah, I know! lol
{tears up a bit} Awww, you know, it's readers like you that make me want to keep on writing =) You actually GET what I'm trying to do! Fluffy fics are nice, but it's not like they really could happen in the real world! GOSH you rock!
{gives you thumbs up back} And YOU also need to keep on being awesome! ;)
Hehe I agree :P This one is cute, too =) I'm glad =) LOL but I never hated you for it :P I always kept reading because I knew you were gonna make it work in the end! Good stories are ones you can read and relate to or really connect with the characters to. That's why yours rock =)
LOL and I hurt Kris once and feel guilty :P You flippin almost killed Adam and Kris billions of times! ROFL!
Well, now I can see why you warned me beforehand at least. I mean... o.0 ?!?!?! Didn't see actual RAPE coming. Erk. Just a tip, consider putting a warning in flashing bold on the top of chapters that need it. Some other readers might not want to read the scene.
Other than that... I hope u make things better next chappie!!! Or else. Lol, jk jk. *bounds off to read*
re rape scenecunningdebJanuary 19 2011, 18:13:04 UTC
Let me say you don't need to apologize to me. As you said, drama is a part of it and you can't have drama with conflict and some darkness. It seems a natural way to go since Crystal is a psycho and this def seems like something she would do, it's not something new to her character.
I'm glad Adam will support him. Got me a little worried about Crystal bosting she was going to have her baby. At this point, since I'm behind, you may have already gotten to this but I wonder if she did get pregnant but Kris gets custody
Re: re rape sceneglambertrockJanuary 20 2011, 00:48:58 UTC
Phew. I'm so glad you were one of the ones I didn't get like, a backlash from. I mean, it's not like I wrote ALL that went on. I just wrote it happened. And, exactly as you said, it fits Crystal's character completely.
Well, you know what, your comment kind of made me think. You know, I haven't really touched on that whole 'I'm going to have your baby' thing, but, I think I have an idea.....hmmm...AH, I'm not going to tell you (or my farther ahead readers!} where I'm going with this! Just know you gave me an idea! bwahaha lol
Hugs and thanks for not going all backlashy on me XD
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so I desperately wish that I can transfer to Ben school right now and be his classmate, his lunch friend, his all stuffs since he still don't has any companion for now.(LOL) *make my wish come true, writer...LOL...you're the fairy in this story anyway....*
"Lunch next," Ben said with a funny grin on his face. He isn't that bad when he's not trying to plot to kill you, Kris thought to himself as he looked at the next period.- HOLD ON! are you just staring at MY Ben??? (since when Ben is mine? LOL. I don't know)....put your sight on your man mister, Ben is mine.lalalala ( ... )
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and now... Oooooh, poor boys =(
lol, enough with this nonsense :p you know I loved it!
Still, I don't like to see little Krissy be raped... but hey, it's only a story :p lol
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Yeah, I know! lol
{tears up a bit} Awww, you know, it's readers like you that make me want to keep on writing =) You actually GET what I'm trying to do! Fluffy fics are nice, but it's not like they really could happen in the real world! GOSH you rock!
{gives you thumbs up back} And YOU also need to keep on being awesome! ;)
Hehe I agree :P This one is cute, too =)
I'm glad =) LOL but I never hated you for it :P I always kept reading because I knew you were gonna make it work in the end! Good stories are ones you can read and relate to or really connect with the characters to. That's why yours rock =)
LOL and I hurt Kris once and feel guilty :P You flippin almost killed Adam and Kris billions of times! ROFL!
0_0 oh gosh. :P
SO ARE YOU!
lol :P
Peace!
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Just a tip, consider putting a warning in flashing bold on the top of chapters that need it. Some other readers might not want to read the scene.
Other than that... I hope u make things better next chappie!!! Or else. Lol, jk jk. *bounds off to read*
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Oh, you know I will :P
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I'm glad Adam will support him. Got me a little worried about Crystal bosting she was going to have her baby. At this point, since I'm behind, you may have already gotten to this but I wonder if she did get pregnant but Kris gets custody
Hugs
Deb <333
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Well, you know what, your comment kind of made me think. You know, I haven't really touched on that whole 'I'm going to have your baby' thing, but, I think I have an idea.....hmmm...AH, I'm not going to tell you (or my farther ahead readers!} where I'm going with this! Just know you gave me an idea! bwahaha lol
Hugs and thanks for not going all backlashy on me XD
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