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Long way from Conway (45 part 2/?) - Proper Comment *1* unpublicguy March 8 2011, 10:48:23 UTC

some errors that I found so far...
(not sure whether am pointing it right though since you're the official writer... LOL
oh..am BOLDing the error.. :p)

"Ben, just go up, pay your dollar, and then sing your song. Everything will go smoothly after that. I promise."
- probably missing word "THERE" after the word UP?

he was just their for Ben
Soon, knowing that their would probably be people wanting to sing after them,
Cass and I got together by singing up their tonight!
- am pretty sure it's suppose to be "THERE"

Just a hour or two more
- a -> an

Like I said... it's only a minor grammar error. LOL. I only understand the word THEIR is supposed to be THERE after re-read it for the 3rd time. LOL. Oh well, whatever~

TBC~

Re: Long way from Conway (45 part 2/?) - Proper Comment *1* glambertrock March 8 2011, 20:35:01 UTC

lol :P I wrote this at like, 2 am on Saturday, so...yeah, I take this as an accomplishment lol

Long way from Conway (45 part 2/?) - Proper Comment *2* unpublicguy March 8 2011, 11:18:20 UTC

*Just so you know, am dying HERE to express my feeling on Ben part, but I will save the best part for the last...LOL*

"Honey, do I look like an ATM to you?"

- ROFL... ~ if you can cash out money for Kris at that time... then I think the answer is YES!!!

"Well," Kris said shrugging, "you could cheer for me and make me not look like an idiot.."
- Am LITERALLY doing this when you're singing upstage

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Re: Long way from Conway (45 part 2/?) - Proper Comment *2* unpublicguy March 8 2011, 16:51:20 UTC

I just found this and though it really suited with this line...LOL

looked back to find Brad smiling like he was 'a boss'

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Re: Long way from Conway (45 part 2/?) - Proper Comment *2* glambertrock March 8 2011, 22:47:34 UTC

I SAW THAT GIF WHEN I WROTE THAT SENTENCE LOL

That was the one time I thought Sam (him^) looked hot as heck lol

Re: Long way from Conway (45 part 2/?) - Proper Comment *2* glambertrock March 8 2011, 22:46:42 UTC

I loved writing that line :P

BAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA XD

IT WAS YOU AND JAMES?????????? GAH I DID NOT KNOW THAT!

CAN I HAVE IT????????? I WANT THE MACHINE LOL

oh boy lol

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Re: Long way from Conway (45 part 2/?) - Proper Comment *1/3* glambertrock March 8 2011, 22:55:03 UTC

Oh lordy :P
HAI BEN! PUPPY MISSES YOU!

*hugs Ben* I just know you're that hot ;)

*hugs you and Ben* YOU'RE WELCOME!

haha I made it special in different ways ;)

*wipes now slobbery face* Uh....you're welcome? ROFL jk lol :P

HAD YOU IN MIND THE WHOLE TIME ;D

I LOVE THAT TIE SO MUCH AND I KNEW YOU WOULD SO....YEAH!

Long way from Conway (45 part 2/?) - Proper Comment *2/3* unpublicguy March 8 2011, 14:01:46 UTC

*now am going to show you what is my expression during the whole Ben proposal scene:*

James.....come on up here, will ya'?"
- am literally doing this though

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Re: Long way from Conway (45 part 2/?) - Proper Comment *2/3* glambertrock March 8 2011, 23:00:39 UTC

LOL you think I would make it bad? lol

The song is so sweet-I think it adds the effect <3

NO FREAKIN WAY! I TOTALLY JUST RANDOMLY MADE THAT UP!
Well damn. ROFL

BEN AIN'T NO SILY BILLY-HE WAS JEALOUS FOR A REASON! ;)

Awww I'm so glad you liked it :) That was a fun scene to write <3

DURRRRRRRRRRRR LOL

Hahaha very, at that moment ;)

Hmmmm....I'm pretty sure he does. Yeah, am pretty sure :)

BAHAHA It's means "You can do this, you already are gonna' win this, you've got this". Yup!

Re: Long way from Conway (45 part 2/?) - Proper Comment *2/3* unpublicguy March 9 2011, 00:14:18 UTC

YES FREAKIN WAY GLAMBERTROCK. You better believe it because I have the ring to prove it. LOL.

Well, it's a good thing though. now you don't have to worry about me cheating or drooling over another guy since I have the ring to keep my heart in place. LOL.

Hahaha very, at that moment ;)
- I DOUBT THIS LINE!!! He's getting Toppy! much in bed right now. LOL. I guess he's already overcome his shyness or something.

and thank you for putting the lines that I'm blinking in this comment. I didn't know that Ben is HOPELESS ROMANTIC
guy. Gah! am one of them. I feel like am walking on the cloud right now, knowing my sexy husband is a romantic guy. :D

Ben & I are about to watch another movie...you're welcome to join us. I got lots of mint ice cream if you want later on while watching the movie. LOL.

Re: Long way from Conway (45 part 2/?) - Proper Comment *2/3* glambertrock March 9 2011, 03:40:28 UTC

"If you liked it then you should'a put a ring on it-"

Oh. Sorry. lol, random song moment :D

GO RINGS!

Haha well, ice cream does bring some confidence....lol

XD He's like how I wish Blaine on Glee would be. lol.

I shall join, considering my Klaine world of crazy is going mad because of the writers and how slow they are progressing and....yeah lol. I need comfort food lol

Long way from Conway (45 part 2/?) - Proper Comment *3/3* unpublicguy March 8 2011, 14:02:40 UTC

so yeah... that's it. since Ben already go to get his mint ice-cream, he's sending you his regard and want to tell you that you don't have to worry about him during this whole week with me. LOL. He's seem happy for some reason. When I ask about it, he said it's because he likes my house since I have so many mint ice cream in my freezer, but I think it's about something else. My bet is on the stuffs that happened this morning in our bed :p
*This line is cross out because am supposed to tell you about my intimate moment with Ben, but Ben kept insisting to not telling you anything because he's embarrassed, you know since this morning is his first time sleeping with a guy. LOL. oh well~*

to all KRADAM shipper

Don't you guys worry, starting next chapter, Kris & Adam will be back on action. LOL. So don't worry okay!

Love it!

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Re: Long way from Conway (45 part 2/?) - Proper Comment *3/3* glambertrock March 8 2011, 23:03:01 UTC

He's seem happy for some reason. When I ask about it, he said it's because he likes my house since I have so many mint ice cream in my freezer, but I think it's about something else. My bet is on the stuffs that happened this morning in our bed :p

I laughed so loud....XD

Awwww, tell Ben not to be so embarrassed ;)

Hahaha KRADAM WILL BE IN THE NEXT PART FOR SURE! FOR SURE!!!!!!!!

So glad you did :)