Natural Born Killer - Chapter 7 (Veronica/Logan) NC-17

[glasheen25]

Title: Natural Born Killer
Author: glasheen25
Fandom: Veronica Mars
Characters/Pairings: Veronica/Logan, Mac, Keith
Word Count: 4276
Rating: NC-17 for language, violence and sex
Spoilers: none
Summary: Estranged from Logan, Veronica is working a particularly violent series of murders for the FBI. Post-series three.

Comments

[p2880]

You're doing a great job keeping both story lines interesting. When the witness was describing the possible suspect my stomach dropped thinking she was possibly describing Logan until she mentioned the blue eyes. Logan's eyes are brown.

I'm glad that Mac, Wallace, and Keith are all on V's side in the LV relationship without being so partisan as to ratchet up the animosity they and V would feel toward Logan.

The idea of the killer being a copycat for a number of different famous killers is brilliant! Kudos!

Can't wait for more!

[glasheen25]

Thanks for the lovely review:)

I watch way too many documentaries about famous murderers and I thought it might be a good idea to incorporate it into the fic. Glad you liked it!!

And I love Veronica/Logan together but I think it would be understandable that Keith would be a little wary of V getting back with Logan considering how their relationship ended the last time. Keith's so adorably overprotective of Veronica ♥ ♥ ♥

[sanya4]

I'm really enjoying this fic, especially the LoVe parts. :)

The mysterious murders are keeping me on my toes. And I was worried that the eyewitness was going to give out Logan's description. Veronica suspecting him of another murder would just break my heart (not to mention Logan's).

I'm looking forward to the next update.

[glasheen25]

Yay!! Glad you're enjoying the fic so far:)

I'll try to get the next chapter up a lot quicker this time!!!

[medjunkie]

This is great, I like the FBI stuff, I think you are developing that well, and am loving the LoVe too :)

[glasheen25]

Thanks so much:) Glad you are enjoying the story ♥