I got me some bad news for you, Sunshine [1/2]

Dec 12, 2009 17:11


Title: I got me some bad news for you, Sunshine
Pairings: Kankuro/Temari, one-sided Hinata/Kankuro, Shikamaru/Temari, Hinata/Neji
Summary: My sister was back, but without the one I loved, without the one who would have none of me, and now she was gone.
Warnings: violence
Disclaimer: I just take them out to play
A/N: Title is a line from In the Flesh by ( Read more... )

shikamaru/temari, naruto, fanfic, kankuro/temari, hinata/neji, hinata/kankuro

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hollybennett123 December 12 2009, 18:27:29 UTC
Weirdly enough, a few days ago I was thinking how I hadn't read any Sandcest for aaaages, and how I might write some Kankurou/Temari some time when I get the chance! I loved this, they really do make such a messed up but amazing pairing.

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glass_yam December 12 2009, 23:24:40 UTC
i know, i love the pairing, more so than either gaara/kankuro, or gaare/temari, i think, though i love gaara too! haha thanks so much for the feedback!

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hungrytiger11 December 13 2009, 13:57:04 UTC
I really like this style. The only thing that is a little odd is you start out with Kuro talking directly to Temari using the word "you" and then switch it to "she" so it is a little confusing. However, the description is fantastic as is the angst.

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glass_yam December 13 2009, 15:31:02 UTC
there was a reason for that i know... cant remember now though lol, oh yeah! i think it changes when he realises what's happened to Hinata, and when he's finished taking care of her :) it really makes me happy that you like the style, tbh i wasnt sure about it myself, so thanks a lot!

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glass_yam January 7 2010, 11:24:48 UTC
since posting that, ive changed my mind and changed it all to you haha, thanks for letting me know!

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