One Fell Swoop

Jan 21, 2010 01:57


Title: One Fell Swoop
Pairings: Nico/Percy, Annabeth/Percy
Summary: It's always a disconcerting feeling when something very safe and sure, something you would have relied upon forever, ups and leaves. Sort of like when you miss a step going downstairs, and your stomach swoops, and you wonder how you could have missed it.
Warnings: slash, ooc-ness
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percy jackson, nico/percy, fanfic, annabeth/percy

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mizstorge January 25 2010, 11:45:41 UTC
...he was everywhere, I’d never noticed his scent before, the sea obviously, but something else, something so quintessentially Percy...

Loved it!

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glass_yam January 25 2010, 19:10:39 UTC
my favourite line too, i have to admit :D thanks for the review! wow, two reviews in one day - i am VR happy right now XD - thank you!

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lalikaa February 1 2010, 20:54:02 UTC
FUCK IT.

Now I love Peter too, and I don't even like OCs. But he was a good one: not too important to the story, yet still a witty character. Why can't all Ocs be like that?

I pretty much adore this fic. There were too many lines that made me laugh or go "awww". Very cute and in-charcter.

The only thing that had me confused is when Racheal popped up, but I guess she just does that, haha. xD

Have you written any other fanfiction?

Oh, and by the way, I am all for Nico loving both kinds of fags. Totally his character. xD

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glass_yam February 2 2010, 11:14:02 UTC
yay! i tried my vr hardest not to make Peter to important in this, given that its Nico's fic, so i had to channel it into another story :)
im vr vr tempted to squee right now, but my english teacher's secretly a gorgon, so she might not apprectiate it. gawd, i used a pj reference in semi-real life! lord i need to get out more... anyhoo, im soo happy you thought that they were in character, cz i was majorly stressing!
yeahh the Racheal thing was odd, i know, but i think i just wanted to show that her and Nico were friends, and i just had to mock the people who think Nico/Racheal would be a good thing :$
ive done quite a lot of other stuff, but not so much on here, some things on my ff.net account (under AWarpedViewOfReality, dont ask) but its old stuff, so not vr good :/ thank you for the review! totally made my day :D

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lalikaa February 2 2010, 23:42:32 UTC
Haha, understandable I suppose. xD

What a Ms. Dodds. (see, I'm nerdy too!)

No need to stress! You did great!

Haha, I can get that too. It was just that the kiss totally took me by surprise. xD

OK, cool. I'll check it out.

My pleasure~! <3

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