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Nov 22, 2009 00:42

Title: Need of Valour Chapter 3
Author: GlassSnowdrop
Rating: T
Pairing: Emily/OC, Morgan/Reid, Garcia/OC
Summary: The BAU team travel to London to help out Scotland Yard with a case involving an unsub obsessed with Greek Mythology. Scotland Yard enlist the help of a young professor, and things get interesting.

( We’re simply nudging Reid and Morgan together. It’s fairly obvious they have more than just friendly feelings towards each other, and we’ve decided to make it happen )

Comments 8

emmakinney November 22 2009, 14:31:35 UTC

Hey, I just read all three chapters together and I am really enjoying it. You go into such depth about the murders and the mythology which is refreshing. Yet, the characters are also central.

You don't like London? I have been there three times. I enjoyed more the latter two times, probably because I was in the West End and I was mesmerised by all the theatres :D

I can't wait for more. And I love that the three girls are consorting to set up our two boys.

Really well done, eagerly awaiting the next chapters.

:)

glasssnowdrop November 22 2009, 15:45:53 UTC

thanks! I felt a little bit like I was going too much in depth and getting too wordy near the end. Did it seem like that? or was it okay?

I do like London!

emmakinney November 22 2009, 15:58:57 UTC

Oh, well I was just curious because you said it was a sad kind of place, just wondered it you liked it... Sorry, it's just my curiosity getting the better of me :)

It was a bit wordy, not near the end, but there seemed to be a lot of description in some places and not so much in others. You got the characters down though which is sometimes hard in fanfic.

The wordiness is lessened by the light-heartedness of the team and the girls trying to set up Morgan and Reid. It's a nice break away from the severity of the crimes and the depth of the theory.

I hope that makes sense, I'm kind of rushing off to go back to uni :)

But, I really love this, I just want to make sure you know that :)

Emma

glasssnowdrop November 22 2009, 23:34:07 UTC

ah good! all of that is pretty much what I was aiming for, so I'm glad it wasn't lost in the delivery.

i'll update as soon as I can! the next chapter will be less about the murders and more about the characters.

brittdavis21 November 22 2009, 23:26:10 UTC

Was Emily flirting wiht Briseis?

Just leave it to Gracia to get our boys together.

glasssnowdrop November 22 2009, 23:32:43 UTC

hehe she may have been :] you'll have to wait and see!

exactly. if anybody can do it, penelope can!

mozzdi November 23 2009, 05:35:49 UTC

Wow, just read all 3 chapters at once and I really like this story. It's well written and you got the characters right and I like Garcia & Briseis connecting on the same level for some cute matchmaking. Hope we see some action between Briseis and Emily, they would be cute together too...I think that's where you are going with them, unless it's my wishful thinking.

glasssnowdrop November 23 2009, 05:43:04 UTC

yay! I'm so glad people are actually liking this story! the next chapter will be much clearer on the relationship front for a few characters. stay tuned...(should be up tomorrow).