Squalo x Yama! WHEEEE! I love it. And the last sentence.
During the alleyway fucking in the rain (which is hawt), I was expecting Yama's dad to walk in on them. And then I read on, only to find out that there's no message and then I yell, "Arrrgh!".
To which my sister comes into my room and asks, "What?"
And I tell her, "Squalo had sex with Yama without a message."
She gives me a look and says, "You read too much fanfiction."
asdfghjkl. Well. Um. @_@ THANK YOU. <333333333 I had an epic nosebleed all over the keyboard. This is perfect. Made my night. (And your Yamamoto is lovely! You shouldn't worry about that. And you Squalo... "I'm not fucking in this for you." Arrrrgh. Too lovely.)
(And thanks for the message, too. <3 I think I will write about you all. You're too crazy not to. Andrew, for example, got Josh the movie "Snoop Dogg's Hood of Horrors" for his birthday. We ROFLled.)
The only thing I feel kinda off about this is the pace. It didn't feel natural to me, for some reason. Kinda choppy and rushed. Maybe it's what you intended it to sound like, and if it were, then ignore me <3
Otherwise, it was hot :3 Sex in the rain is yummy, plus it's Yamamoto and Squalo, so it fits perfectly.
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Glad you liked it! Even if it was written by such a young'un as me XD
I will spend the rest of my day laughing at this inconceivable difference in age and life experience...
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During the alleyway fucking in the rain (which is hawt), I was expecting Yama's dad to walk in on them. And then I read on, only to find out that there's no message and then I yell, "Arrrgh!".
To which my sister comes into my room and asks, "What?"
And I tell her, "Squalo had sex with Yama without a message."
She gives me a look and says, "You read too much fanfiction."
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Epilogue:
Yamamoto is lying in the alleyway without his pants when his father comes out the door.
"Dad," he says, trying to come up with a really good excuse for his nakedness and failing miserably.
Yamamoto's dad looks at him for a long moment.
"Takeshi," he says gravely. "I think it's time you and I had a little conversation about the bees and the...er...bees..."
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SCANDAL OF THE CENTURY!
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Well.
Um.
@_@ THANK YOU. <333333333 I had an epic nosebleed all over the keyboard. This is perfect. Made my night. (And your Yamamoto is lovely! You shouldn't worry about that. And you Squalo... "I'm not fucking in this for you." Arrrrgh. Too lovely.)
(And thanks for the message, too. <3 I think I will write about you all. You're too crazy not to. Andrew, for example, got Josh the movie "Snoop Dogg's Hood of Horrors" for his birthday. We ROFLled.)
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(OMG, THAT'S AMAZING! Pablo gave me strawberry-daiquiris-in-a-bag for my birthday last year)
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Otherwise, it was hot :3 Sex in the rain is yummy, plus it's Yamamoto and Squalo, so it fits perfectly.
Also, love the last line XD ♥
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Last line was the whole point of the story XD
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Last line was absolutely perfect, and it made me lol XD
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