Comments | glasssubway: Spanner/Shouichi for Linh

glasssubway

Spanner/Shouichi for Linh

Jul 19, 2008 02:54

I am very tired, but I did finish it.

Connection Change/Crossed Wires

Wake up get up wash up dress up-

Spanner hits the alarm clock with a wrench. He didn’t want to hear orders at five in the morning. It would take at least an hour for him to dissolve his mind to the state where he could follow blindly, but he doesn’t have an hour; he has thirty ( Read more... )

hitman reborn!

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keikain July 19 2008, 16:56:23 UTC

Oh, wow. I haven't had the time lately to read a lot of Millefiore fanfic, but I'm glad I read this one.

This is nicely melancholy and I love the way you write Spanner. <3 <3

glasssubway July 19 2008, 20:29:31 UTC

Oh Shini <3 I'm glad you did too

Is it okay to friend you?

keikain July 20 2008, 17:55:10 UTC

Only if it's okay for me to friend you back? XD

glasssubway July 21 2008, 05:20:56 UTC

Well, of course you can friend the great me back XD

takashima_tsu July 19 2008, 21:20:08 UTC

Spanner hits the alarm clock with a wrench.

Ahaha. That particular mental image made me laugh.
Though there was definetly less laughter after.

I love the subtle feeling of, as the person said above, melancholy through this. And the way you portray Spanner and his ideas about Shouichi are, well...excellent. :D

glasssubway July 21 2008, 05:19:41 UTC

Why thank you! *bows*

You know...when I wrote that sentence, I didn't even realize the comedic effects of that XD No wonder he couldn't wake up later on if he destroyed his alarm clock with a wrench...

anonymous July 20 2008, 14:46:14 UTC

I agree with benizakura, keep it up !

glasssubway July 21 2008, 05:19:59 UTC

Thank you! I'll be sure to XD

dame_batsie July 20 2008, 16:44:16 UTC

I lurb your writing and your Spanner. I also love the mechanical metaphors in the first half of the story.

<3

DR. STEIN WOOT glasssubway July 21 2008, 05:20:33 UTC

The mechanical stuff always gets me, I always feel like I'm being too repetitive with it because I don't actually know...anything about it XD

Re: DR. STEIN WOOT dame_batsie July 21 2008, 16:23:07 UTC

Ha ha. You're a really good bluffer then. XD

ext_1024225 July 10 2014, 13:06:39 UTC

Soo...am I the only one said the italic part in my head like Technologic from Daft Punk? 'Caauuusse, I think that kinda fits. XD

Also, I'm sad that Shou-chan was so rude to Spanner! I mean, I hope this is an act for Byakuran's sake but....ugh it hurt my heart!

Still, I love the way you portray Spanner! Lovely writing, truly XD