Comments | glazed_over08: a jls one-shot pt. 1

glazed_over08

a jls one-shot pt. 1

Dec 06, 2006 23:26

I kinda wrote a litte somethin'? The idea sounded a whole lot better in my head than on screen, though, so uhh, don't mind it.

So, this is an RPF. If real-life fic offends you in some way, then I guess you shouldn't click?

Anyway, this is a JLs one-shot, and since everyone wants a JLs commentary so badly, I tried writing one up, on ep 409, and uhh, ( Read more... )

the jls, fic

Comments 15

poupa December 6 2006, 15:41:07 UTC

great job, Wendy! I'm imagining it now *sigh* Thanks alot hun, great fic.
Off to read Pt2

glazed_over08 December 6 2006, 15:42:51 UTC

Wow, you read FAST, Sal! :D Glad you like it.

thedreamygirl December 6 2006, 16:12:28 UTC

That was so so so cute! I'm just sitting here and reading it and picturing it all in my head and I'm grinning like crazy at my laptop screen. It's so sweet and you have no idea how much I wish this was the commentary we got instead of the one we actually did. And she introduced herself as Bethany Joy Lenz! Don't think I didn't see that! It's just too adorable! I haven't even read the second part yet and I'm already sure this is something I will read again and again!
*runs off to find the second part*

glazed_over08 December 10 2006, 07:27:29 UTC

HEE! Thank you! I was wondering if anyone would spot that. :P Yeah, Galeotti doesn't really exist in my world. LOL! I'm so glad you like it :)

deea347 December 6 2006, 16:21:47 UTC

“We can cuddle here,” he teased her, opening his arms to her.
So, they're a couple in this fic? How sweet, dude. :)

“And it’s Tom’s mom, and she says,” he pauses, putting on a Southern twang in his voice, barely being able to keep the laughter at bay. “Tom, darlin’, can’t you do something about the lighting? Chad’s hair is glowin’ in the dark like a glow-stick.”
LMAO. You know we all love Chad's hair, I think we should even get a nickname for it. :)

He waited, and laughed at Haley’s line. “I love you when you’re all sarcastic.”
l.o.v.e. They're so lovey dovey, it's contagious. I so wish this was real life. *sigh*

“Must be all the calculus and balloons and… radiuses.”
“Radii.”
He turned to look at her incredulously. “Whaa-?”

“Okay, while brains are a turn-on, I’m just going to ignore the fact that you actually knew that.”
OMG! So funny, I can actually picture the whole scene, James' facial expressions and all. And brains are a turn-on... *thud* you sure know your stuff, James. I've got brains too, wanna make out? ;)

"Mark, if you' ( ... )

glazed_over08 December 10 2006, 07:30:42 UTC

OMG! So funny, I can actually picture the whole scene, James' facial expressions and all. And brains are a turn-on... *thud* you sure know your stuff, James. I've got brains too, wanna make out? ;)"

Hee! He knows his stuff. Joy educated him well! :P

I'm so glad that you like it, Andrea! Means a lot to me! :)

lovesafool December 6 2006, 16:50:19 UTC

Aww a desperately needed RL thing too! I am so glad you decided to make this a JLs fic! They need to do a commentary and they are just so darn tootin' cute!! I can't wait to go read the 2nd part! Awesome job!

glazed_over08 December 10 2006, 07:31:42 UTC

Aw, thank you Caro! :D

burymyregret December 6 2006, 23:15:30 UTC

You own me for writing this. That was just so damn cute and I really wish it were true. I can't wait for the second part!

glazed_over08 December 10 2006, 07:32:43 UTC

Hee, glad you liked it! *hugs*