I guess what I mean is I like the style of it, I think it's neat to see not only the conversation but what's going on in the characters (your?) head. You combined them with out any of the "he said/she said" business.
Woah ... dude, your random writing, thinks like me O.O ... Well, switch it to a girl thinking things about a guy ... but basically the same. I like it, muchly. :) I think that rocks, so much so, i want you to be my dad :) ... you'll be the only one .. that i don't call mom :);). you win!
HAHA, yeah it's because i'm cool that way ^.^ .. so are you my new dad?? cause .. then that would be cool, cause then i'd actually have someone to call dad!!! !rockin' socks you know? :D:D XD
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You are ten levels of awsome.
♥ Morri
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You guys are... lucky pennies. =D
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I liked that.
it was well written (you're style reminds me of James Frey's)
and cute.
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Odd. I finished my homework close to midnight and randomly decided to write.
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I think it's neat to see not only the conversation but what's going on in the characters (your?) head. You combined them with out any of the "he said/she said" business.
man, I wish I were more articulate.
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I like it, muchly. :) I think that rocks, so much so, i want you to be my dad :) ... you'll be the only one .. that i don't call mom :);). you win!
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I love how you switched topics like three times in those two lines. =P
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