[GFS Exchange Fic] The Motta Enigma by sceptick for dominant_spoon

[gfs_exchange]

Title: The Motta Enigma
Author: sceptick
Written for: dominant_spoon
Prompt:Sugar/Lauren; a newer-new rebel Glee Club, this time with Lauren and Sugar on lead.
Pairings: pre-Lauren/Sugar, mentions of various members of New Directions
Rating/Warnings: PG, no warnings in particular. No spoilers.
Word Count: 3,400
Notes: A thousand apologies to the recipient for the

Comments

[alexfoster451]

Loved this and the characterizations. Thanks for sharing. :)

[sceptick]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :D

[anna_sinistra]

That was amazing.

[sceptick]

Aww, thank you!

[abluegirl]

Your characterization is so perfect and spot on. I love your Lauren so much, and your Sugar is priceless. ♥ This was excellent!

[sceptick]

I'm glad you liked it, bb! Thank you for reading :D

[dropsofviolet]

This is hilarious and so fun. Love it!

[sceptick]

Thanks, bb! And thank you for the wonderful job you've done, how understanding you've been, etc <333

[dropsofviolet]

No, no, thank you for saving my skin! Seriously :D

[dominant_spoon]

So I'm trying to condense all my feels into something coherent, but it's not working out exceptionally well because this is flawfree and I might have puked sparkly rainbows from sheer joy. All of this is so spectacular, they're so in-character and the combination of absurdity and semirealism is spot-on, and the dynamic though. Just, ajfkadjfklasjfsl.

I love the cooperating abrasiveness and softness of Lauren's personality (Lauren put it there, and she feels like she just kicked a cute, over-excited cartoon animal in the face or something. That’s pretty much how Sugar looks.). The little things in there -- like the snacks, and McGuyver’d like a boss, and also the black market of elementary school cookies (Unfortunately, she didn’t think of getting the idea copyrighted until after the second, gayer Sherlock Holmes movie came out. Millions of potential dollars and infomercials, wasted. Guy Ritchie is on her list.) -- are so awesome, Ican'teven -

Also, Sugar's overzealousness, total lack of awareness concerning the Real World ("Also, do

[sceptick]

Oh wow, omg. This is an insanely kind comment! I'm grinning from ear to ear, for reals. Thank you so much for this lovely feedback ♥ I'm so glad you liked it!