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motylik June 19 2010, 21:33:10 UTC
I love this! Very promising start. I have a soft spot for FBI stories. :D Can't wait for the next part? And I echo the when's Rachel going to show up sentiment. :D

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an_an0maly June 19 2010, 21:57:35 UTC
I know she turns up. I just get really impatient cause I love Rachel. So now you can start pestering with me about Rachel. :D

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motylik June 20 2010, 10:39:07 UTC
I love Rachel too. She's just <3. I shall pester with you! :D

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gleek23 June 24 2010, 00:58:17 UTC
Bahaha, that's all I need... you and an_an0maly hassling me about Rachel. ;) She'll show up, and then I don't think I'll be able to get rid of her. :p

I'm glad that several people have mentioned they approve of FBI stories. :) I hope to have some more up soon.

Thanks for reading, and for the feedback. :D

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marshmallowhobo June 20 2010, 00:17:44 UTC
Now I know how you feel when you're like, so much further ahead in HMoP than what I've been posting! I want to like, squee so hard and start demanding that you send me more now! And I must refrain from spoiling. So uh, yeah, this is amazing. You know that I absolutely love it. I love the case, I really appreciate the gruesome, yet not overdone detailing. FBI!Quinn may just be like, the sexiest thing ever. And yes, I would very much like more. So I hope you wrote on the plane, woman! No sleeping! I did enough of that for the both of us! More?!

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marshmallowhobo June 20 2010, 00:18:03 UTC
Also... where's Rachel? :p

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gleek23 June 24 2010, 01:07:48 UTC
Not you, too.

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gleek23 June 24 2010, 01:07:13 UTC
Yeah, it's difficult. Heh.

I'm trying to write more! I am! As soon as I have something substantial I will send it your way. :) And FBI!Quinn is fucking hot. I mean, there's no other way around it. :D

(I did write a little on the plane, but it needs some tidying.)

Thank you as always for reading and the encouragement.

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angelicmuse18 June 20 2010, 02:10:46 UTC
I just keep adding stories to my ever growing list of 'What I need to obsess over now' ... :D Your story just got added. This has promise and I love me some suspense.

When is Rachel coming into play? I promise not to pester about Rachel. Instead I will say this : When do I get me some Santana? :D

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gleek23 June 24 2010, 01:13:14 UTC
I'm so glad that you like the start. Thanks for the encouragement... it's needed. :)

Santana is in the next part. Never fear. :D And Rachel isn't too far off. ;)

Thanks for the feedback and for reading!

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tawg June 20 2010, 02:27:33 UTC
This is quite interesting. I like gritty crime stories, so I get the feeling I'll love this. It doesn't read like a fanfic, which is interesting. Maybe it'll change when more Glee characters turn up, but for now Quinn could be anyone, you know? I like that, it gives her room to shape her character.

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gleek23 June 24 2010, 01:26:47 UTC
I'm so happy you are finding it interesting. I hope to keep it intriguing... we'll see. ;) And yeah, I mean... it's AU, so they're going to be different. I hope to have time to properly develop the characters. :)

Thanks so much for the comment, and I hope to keep it worth reading. :D

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spencer_t June 20 2010, 03:07:56 UTC
Yayyyyyyyy!!! you posted, what a wonderful thing to wake up to :D
and the banner looks pretty, awww so very happy you liked it.
Cannot wait for more!! and I second..third..whatever..the cry for Rachel!!

basically just need more of everything ;)

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gleek23 June 24 2010, 01:48:54 UTC
The banner is BEAUTIFUL! I love it so. Thank you again. I will be sending you more soon, I'm sure. :)

And I will bring out Rachel soon enough! Sheesh, people. ;)

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