What A Wicked Game You Play

Oct 19, 2011 14:16


Rating: NC-17 (overall)
Pairing: Kurt/Blaine, Kurt + Finn (friendship), Blaine + Santana (friendship)
Word Count:  3800 words
Summary: Love...friendship...phone sex.
It’s Wednesday evening, and it hasn’t stopped yet. Kurt has been restless all week. He figured he might have been on a high on Monday, the day after.., his body still experiencing the ( Read more... )

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notsomediumdrip October 20 2011, 02:11:34 UTC
How did I miss the first part! Both are amazing and I abso,utely love them both. I think you really nailed the characters - pun sorta intended lol - and I love the little pieces of cannon you sneak in. Just a great piece.

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gleekto October 20 2011, 14:14:06 UTC
Thank you so much! Almost everyone reviewing is like 'how did I miss the first part?' - It's because I'm not LJ famous (yet :) lol. I think nailing the characters is what I do best (unfortunately for me, that has only one meaning :)

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brighton_girl October 20 2011, 02:27:40 UTC
I just love how connected they are, really nicely done.

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gleekto October 20 2011, 14:14:41 UTC
I love that - how connected they are. Yes. Thank you.

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frumiousme October 20 2011, 03:01:01 UTC
mmmf. nice.

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gleekto October 20 2011, 14:15:21 UTC
Always makes me smile if I can reduce a reviewer to sounds. Thank you.

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blue_peridot October 26 2011, 19:26:13 UTC
i love the nod to canon in 'practicing'! and really, this is even better than the first part.

the beginning was lovely. i like how they're still just so comfortable with each other. i liked that they talked about telling other people, and i liked the little pun on 'blew'.

i liked finn and kurt being such *brothers*, it was adorable. i'm so glad kurt has someone he can talk to about this. even if finn is being... not that sensitive. and it's nice that the finchel sex went well- hopefully it was good for rachel, too.

i liked the monday morning, and i especially liked "Mondays are a thing to be tolerated, Wednesdays to be surpassed, and Fridays to be achieved." so, SO true!

i think santana might have been my favourite part. i love her fake badassery, and how happy she is for the boys. and blaine's delighted so-what nonchalance was lovely, just lovely. that part was just perfect.

and then the last part was just a perfect way to end it off. those boys... their relationship is just gonna keep getting better.

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gleekto October 26 2011, 20:51:19 UTC
Thank you so so much for this amazingly detailed review (and your other one too!). Honestly, I love all your comments - you noticed so many of the things I did (even I can be amused by my own fics) - I loved the 'blew' line, and Blaine's non-chalance in the Santana part I thought fit perfectly. The 'practicing' pun was actually accidental (because that is SUCH an easy one to overuse) but I wrote it, then realized, and left it. So glad it wasn't too cliche.

And I wrote a three-quel. It's coming hopefully in the next 2 days, definitely on the weekend if not by Friday, but I hope by Friday. With the beta now. It's the final instalment of what I'm calling the Wicked Game trilogy or How I survived the unwelcome hiatus.

They better get Nov 8 right!! Positive experience, positive experience, happy Klaine...drama can come later!!

Thank you again for your lovely reviews.

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blue_peridot November 11 2011, 06:59:02 UTC
you're so welcome! i barely have enough time to leave properly detailed reviews, but i do so like to do so. blaine's nonchalance was perfect. all these little moments make the entire thing so wonderful :)

definitley looking forward to that threequel! by now it's probably up actually, so i'll go looking as soon as i finish commenting. haha, we'd never survive these haituses without fic!

so what did you think of the first time? happy klaine :D

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mardie186 October 30 2011, 21:38:31 UTC
Loved Kurt's conversation with Finn. And how he just can't stop thinking about having sex with Blaine. And he wants more. And the phone sex. And how they need to practice. Yeah boys, practice makes perfect. And hey, maybe instead of a phone call, you could have Skype sex. Seeing is believing.

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