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gleekto

All My Instincts 4/5+Epilogue

Mar 14, 2012 16:21

Title: All My Instincts 4/5 + Epilogue
Pairing/Characters: Kurt and Blaine
Genre: Romance
Rating: PG-13, NC-17 in epilogue
Summary: Anderberry Siblings Universe - In which Blaine and Rachel are siblings, Hiram and Leroy are their dads, and Kurt does not expect that meeting Rachel's younger brother will challenge what he knows to be true about being ( Read more... )

Comments 45

buckeyegrrl March 14 2012, 20:25:13 UTC

I just love this more every time I read it. Damn boys and their damn cute and their damn text messages!

Siiiiigh...

whiterose0328 March 14 2012, 21:53:06 UTC

These boys are giving me cavities!

gleekto March 15 2012, 01:13:21 UTC

Mission accomplished...thank you!

persia_hime March 14 2012, 21:57:46 UTC

Aww! This was so cute, though so short. I still really enjoyed it, the amount of awkward sweetness before their date was overwhelming (in a good way) and then the kiss was like a release of emotion. Such a good adorable chapter.

I can't wait for the next, which will hopefully be longer?!

gleekto March 14 2012, 23:20:50 UTC

Lovely, it was 5200 words! Chapter 1 was 3600, chap 2 was 2600, chapter 3 was 6000...I will take that at as a compliment that it went by so fast that it felt short...but I think perhaps what happened is that you read the other 3 together, right? This is the conundrum of WIP's. You want to get lost in the fic, but then they stop.

So glad you liked it - the awkward sweetness, and the release - exactly. More to come!

persia_hime March 15 2012, 00:29:53 UTC

No actually I read the first two chapters when they were out and then since then I've been following the story. Haha but this chapter felt so much shorter than the rest!

gleekto March 15 2012, 00:39:03 UTC

Well, then, I will have to chock it up to my brilliant writing. lol :)

alianne March 14 2012, 22:38:05 UTC

I LOVE THIS STORY. SO SO MUCH.

Amazing chapter. I love how you write The Boys. And seriously, that was the cutest and best-written kissing scene I've read in a long time. Wonderful.

This is so good.

gleekto March 15 2012, 01:14:55 UTC

Thank you so much. I often find kissing hard to write - the same words keep recurring and then you've used 'tongue' or 'licked' or 'gasped' too many times...so thank you. :)

citizen_bliss March 14 2012, 22:52:14 UTC

ohmygod this is so cute <3

I love this story so much!! :D

gleekto March 15 2012, 01:15:30 UTC

Thank you so much! This is a story with a lot of cute...