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[glimmeringeve]

Well, I've been trying to write something that I like as much as "Regress" which I wrote a couple months ago and everyone seemed to respond well too. I tried a few times but nothing was really coming out very good, until I came up with this in the shower had to write it. I'm very happy with it, but I'm passing it along to my lovely readers and

Comments

[phantomphanson]

I can't decide if it's depressing or what. Because it is, but it's still got a sort of everything-turned-out-okay ending. I don't know. It was well-written, though. Very much so.

[xnikki118x]

Yep!

[onelastdime]

wow. that was really, really good :)

[snowweisz]

Hi! Here via Hanson

I have to say, I'm still halfway through the story, and I'm already friending yout journal because I know I'll want to read more!

Really good. There's a very easy and real sense of honesty in the narrative that makes me feel where he's coming from. Really, good.

:) Thanks for sharing!