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[glishara]

Every so often you just have to laugh at yourself

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[kernowgirl]

Hah. I never wrote a kinkfic, but I once beta'ed one. I seem to recall my comments went along the lines of: "You forgot to give this guy an orgasm." "Exactly how big is this desk?" etc.

The author never responded to me, and I have not ventured back to the genre since!

[philomytha]

Having read it, I do not think you suck at writing sex scenes! I loved the way it segued from a joking conversation that became real and then into action, and you conveyed the urgent confusion of it all very well.