I've been savouring this final comment because this is utterly my favourite part of the Fashion Homin series.
It's written in such a way that you collect up so much of who Changmin was before Yunho and who he's letting himself be now.
You make a neat parallel with his design work: He’d amended and improved and permitted himself to go a little wild, and now his designs have a sharper edge and a new maturity.He really has permitted himself to be less contained and open up to all the promise Yunho gives him. I also like how you've brought back the earlier characters for him to bounce off: Isabella, Milhye - but also Yunho's particular friends Jihuen, Spoon, Donghae - that's such a sweet touch
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Changmin grabs at the doorframe, overcome by an onslaught of love and need. God, four weeks without this man in his arms, in his bed. Changmin wonders how the hell he managed it. This has massive resonance for me right now. The best thing about going away is knowing that you're one step closer to coming home :)
You have me belly-laughing at the hosepipe play, especially Marchesa apologetically joining in, and then I'm sure Yunho falls in the pool deliberately. He knows EXACTLY how to distract his Changmin and he does such a good job of it. Bonus points for Changmin handing over any old wad of money and double bonus-points for mentioning the Larios Centre.
“Missed your smile, your voice, your scent, your hair, your warmth, your everything. Oh baby, I missed you.” “Me too. Every minute of every day.”
Perfect mush, followed by an Ugly, ugly, ugly giggle, and then all that hot mouthing and biting and writhing and fucking. That's like the most perfect three-course-meal all in a few pars. You're seriously good at this
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Oh gosh, I love this verse even more now!! *squeal* Everything's so beautiful. Changmin's dad is a softie inside and he couldn't be happier that his son managed to snatch another winner :D Glad that Yunho's family made it to the wedding as well, that'll double Yunho's happiness though maybe it would be more complete w/ Lagerfeld & Puchi's presence lol But Marchesa is now the Princess of the household! Can almost imagine the chaos when the time comes for her to meet her siblings :p Thanks for sharing this and happy holidays too you!
Thank you! :D yes I thought it was time we saw that Yunho, who always seems so confident, could get just as uncertain as Changmin. And Changmin was there for him (with Marchesa!) just like Yunho is always there for him ♥
I really enjoyed writing the pool scene, from the hosepipe all the way through to the end haha! HoMin are love.
Glad you enjoyed this series, it was awesome fun to write. Merry Christmas to you and your family ^^
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It's written in such a way that you collect up so much of who Changmin was before Yunho and who he's letting himself be now.
You make a neat parallel with his design work: He’d amended and improved and permitted himself to go a little wild, and now his designs have a sharper edge and a new maturity.He really has permitted himself to be less contained and open up to all the promise Yunho gives him. I also like how you've brought back the earlier characters for him to bounce off: Isabella, Milhye - but also Yunho's particular friends Jihuen, Spoon, Donghae - that's such a sweet touch ( ... )
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Changmin grabs at the doorframe, overcome by an onslaught of love and need. God, four weeks without this man in his arms, in his bed. Changmin wonders how the hell he managed it. This has massive resonance for me right now. The best thing about going away is knowing that you're one step closer to coming home :)
You have me belly-laughing at the hosepipe play, especially Marchesa apologetically joining in, and then I'm sure Yunho falls in the pool deliberately. He knows EXACTLY how to distract his Changmin and he does such a good job of it.
Bonus points for Changmin handing over any old wad of money and double bonus-points for mentioning the Larios Centre.
“Missed your smile, your voice, your scent, your hair, your warmth, your everything. Oh baby, I missed you.” “Me too. Every minute of every day.”
Perfect mush, followed by an Ugly, ugly, ugly giggle, and then all that hot mouthing and biting and writhing and fucking. That's like the most perfect three-course-meal all in a few pars. You're seriously good at this ( ... )
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Changmin's dad is a softie inside and he couldn't be happier that his son managed to snatch another winner :D
Glad that Yunho's family made it to the wedding as well, that'll double Yunho's happiness though maybe it would be more complete w/ Lagerfeld & Puchi's presence lol
But Marchesa is now the Princess of the household! Can almost imagine the chaos when the time comes for her to meet her siblings :p
Thanks for sharing this and happy holidays too you!
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I really enjoyed writing the pool scene, from the hosepipe all the way through to the end haha! HoMin are love.
Glad you enjoyed this series, it was awesome fun to write. Merry Christmas to you and your family ^^
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