Fic: Incandescent [TVXQ RPS]

[glitterburn]

Title: Incandescent
Fandom: TVXQ
Pairing: Yunho/Changmin
Rating: R
Summary: As Changmin was only too happy to tell the world on Moonlight Prince, he likes candle wax.
Content notes: Sensation play.

IncandescentHe’s trying to study, and the guy next door is playing loud music

Comments

[lolistar73]

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I swear to gosh Changmin + Yunho + D/s is unbelievably amazing to me. It's just so contradictory to their personalities that it makes me feel giddy when I get to read a well written piece of them in their roles (like Pony).

This was short, sweet and powerful! Yunho knowing what Changmin needed before he did, and Changmin so needy for Yunho and the wax was just *guh*.

And that pic at the bottom is amazing hot! XD

p.s. I can't believe I got here before diagon O.o

[glitterburn]

Thank you ^^

Until this year I'd struggled more with sub!Changmin but since he's been more open about his control freak nature and how he needs to learn to control himself, plus the candle wax thing (OMG boy why did you say that, silly silly lad XD), I'm more comfortable with writing it :D Yunho has always been open about wanting to be controlled so I guess it's less of a challenge and that's why I don't find it so interesting, unless other elements come into it somehow. Conflict makes plot, even if it's just internal conflict! :D

Hemi is so incredibly talented. When she showed me the pic I almost fell off the chair!

[lolistar73]

Conflict makes plot, even if it's just internal conflict! <-- Agreed!

The reason why I love HoMin so much is because I love dominant/pushy bottoms. I've been into 'yaoi' for a really long time but I've almost come to hate it in a way. It's almost as bad are regular het fiction - the bottoms are always just helpless, small and needy (all attributes that are feminized). I love pairings that can switch and HoMin can do that. I love that Yunho needs to be controlled and that Changmin will do the controlling but at the same time Yunho likes to protect and Changmin will defer to Yunho. They just work in dimensions that speak 'real' to me.

And lol that is exactly the reason I like to read well written bottom!Changmin - I love to see how authors interpret the dynamics between HoMin and whether they stay true to the boys' personalities.

[diagon]

p.s. I can't believe I got here before diagon O.o Sometimes I am unforgiveably lazy about responding to fic in writing... Glitterburn withholds new plot ideas (and cake) until I do give feedback, so I'm not too lazy for too long...

[diagon]

*holds arm out for a slap for being so tardy with writing down my thoughts*

First, can I say that the art is seriously sensual. There is something so appealing about the particular line of the curve of Changmin's back. Haeym should know that my comment comes from the depth of admiration of someone who can hardly draw their own curtains at night, let alone a portrait, not least one that captures so fluidly the character of this story.

I have confess that as soon as Changmin mentioned the candle incident my brain went into flashy lighted *fic* *fic* *fic* mode.
It's not even a particular kink I look out for, but it was far too good an opportunity for you to pass up, and you really did get into his head and make the reader share in every sensation.

My favourite part - because I'm odd like that - is Yunho gives him a long look, then closes the door. It's because my favourite thing about them is that after 10 years together they really can read each other's tells. I can just imagine Yunho bopping along in his own world and then

[glitterburn]

Thank you ♥

Candle wax isn't a kink that interests me in the slightest, although I've known a few men who really enjoyed it and I enjoyed hurting them, so... From a technical standpoint this was interesting even if I didn't have an emotional connection, so I'm glad you pointed up the architecture of the fic. It took a while to find the necessary headspace for it but I'm happy with the way it turned out.

[missgossiptvxq]

OH GOD!!!! *Spazzing* first of all *bows* I'm so happy you've updated sec. O.O I can't breathe cuz this was too hot and you definitely took your time making it rich with details. I could see all of it in my head and oh god it was extremely hot and...and I can't describe how I feel and and and *dies happily*

[glitterburn]

Thank you! Two other fics as well - just scroll back a bit, I wrote them a while ago ^^

[missgossiptvxq]

Oh and yes the pic is very very well done! Talent!

[glitterburn]

Hemi is awesomely talented! :D

[cactuzoz]

I knew changmin's confession gonna inspire a lot of wonderful writers and I am glad you wrote about that~

I always have this satisfaction when reading your stories where I can sense and feel their bond even they didn't blatantly voiced that out.
I don't know if people who is not familiar with them can understand that but I totally like the pull and push that minnie's provide here.

The complete trust between them was one of the thing that define their beautiful bond too so as a conclusion, this is one hot and sexy fic from you that involved minnie's kink.

Thank yo for writing this~

[glitterburn]

Thank you, this is such a thoughtful comment and I really appreciate that you saw that the kink aspect was about trust. Too many people just go 'oh it's kink' and don't understand that, frankly, a kinky relationship is deeply romantic because of the amount of trust that's necessary for it to work. Thank you for your insight.