This is a short story I wrote awhile back and have been working on a little. I'm definitely open to any criticism you writerly types feel compelled to give.He sat across from her, toying with the half soggy coaster, trying to think of something worth saying. This was no surprise to her, for they'd come to a point in their intimacy where she could
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She liked the way his hair fell over the brow and hid the secret world his eyes created, as if he knew the great import of his every look and so thought better of letting the world in on it.
write more! i want to know what happens! i'm so curious!
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