hed like a hole blak as ur sole

Sep 28, 2005 23:59


my sole is blak & dead i bet if i took a Xray it wuld look like this:


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cathycg September 29 2005, 05:23:25 UTC
What makes you think your soul is black?
You take care,,hope you will think of another poetry to write!

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gloomanddoom September 29 2005, 07:02:22 UTC
my sols i blak caus i can feel it..im good at vizulising things.

heres anoter peom i wrote just now to desribe it 4 u:

my sole is dark
it has no spark
its totaly blak
my sole wont come back
its lihtles
its liefless
caus i am alwayz alone
no voices can worm thru the phone

*bows*

i used some syvia plat caus i hate my dad 2
& for the rekurd IM NOT USING IAMIC PETAMTER tho its obvius im not caus in most lines i did odd #s of sylbels & if any1 tries to convins me i am i will kil them this time haha

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blackphoenix524 October 1 2005, 11:32:50 UTC
So your soul is black because you can feel it?

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gloomanddoom October 3 2005, 05:49:19 UTC
im beeng intootiv its just a metfor.

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bluemelody October 4 2005, 01:41:16 UTC
i love you like TTTTTHHHHIIIIIIISSSSSSS much!!! even tho i barely know u...lol but i love how u go to the cemetry, feel like the ghosts understand you. i did that once; when something really bad happend (dont want to talk about it) i understand completly, hold in there!!

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gloomanddoom October 5 2005, 07:30:27 UTC
ur so nice :) i wanna know ur secret abowt teh gosts tel me tel me!!!!

((((((bluemelody)))))

iluvu

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