oh my gosh. after you commented i reread it and made changes. all the way up to the hug on the mountain. i can't believe how easy it is to fine tune. i really should do it before i post. and it wasn't just typos either, i changed words and phrases. sorry! but thank you. :)
ohhhh this was amazing... kinda canon but not.. mmm
jack waved his arms in surrender, feigning exhaustion, eyes sideways, head hanging down like a coyote. even his pink tongue was hanging out, and he said real low, almost under his breath, "i'm it, ennis, but you're the one, and you know it. once you realize that, you're gonna be happy."
ugh..love this!
the heat of jack's breath on his neck was driving ennis crazy. jack pushed back some more, and ennis did too. it was an arm wrestling match using their entire bodies, and jack knew he could crumble ennis in one move by simply turning his head and licking an ear and quickly whispering, "i love you."
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Thank you!
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jack waved his arms in surrender, feigning exhaustion, eyes sideways, head hanging down like a coyote. even his pink tongue was hanging out, and he said real low, almost under his breath, "i'm it, ennis, but you're the one, and you know it. once you realize that, you're gonna be happy."
ugh..love this!
the heat of jack's breath on his neck was driving ennis crazy. jack pushed back some more, and ennis did too. it was an arm wrestling match using their entire bodies, and jack knew he could crumble ennis in one move by simply turning his head and licking an ear and quickly whispering, "i love you."
ohhhhh delicious torture indeed ;)
Nice. :D
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