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Undisclosed Desires | Chapter Two

Jul 07, 2010 02:27

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mandycandy218 July 7 2010, 13:32:24 UTC

I have a feeling the night isn't going to be as amazing as she thinks. But, it will give Nate a chance to save her :) Great chapter! Update soon.

gnomess92 July 7 2010, 14:08:12 UTC

thanks Mandy! :D

kitak2 July 7 2010, 15:28:10 UTC

Great plot development. Even though this is an NJ story, I so appreciate you taking the time to develop other characters ...Rufus, Dan, Vanessa, Agnes etc..Its more realistic/natural to show how they all play a part in each others' lives.

gnomess92 July 7 2010, 16:26:27 UTC

thanks so much! :D