Undisclosed Desires | Chapter Four

[gnomess92]

Comments

[kellou24]

Finally some action! I've never considered Nate a badass but you showed me a new side of him.(And it makes him hotter) Oh here's a crazy suggestion: Why don't you kill off Serena? Personally that would make this story go from awesome to incredible.

Update soon:D

[gnomess92]

LMFAO! I totally should, but I dont know if peeps would be too happy about that! :P and then I'd have to write Nate greiving and all that shiz! :D

[kellou24]

I don't think he'd be sad too much. Besides Jenny can help heal him. *smiles innocently*

[gnomess92]

Maybe NJ can kill her off together? ;)

[nicensweet28]

Yes. He made it on time. Luckily Chuck was there to point him in the right direction. I wonder why he was so mad. No guy would be that furious unless someone was trying to take what was his. Lol. Omg. Nate ditching Serena to keep Jenny company and make her feel safe. Her true knight. Can't wait to see what's next. I'll be waiting :)

[gnomess92]

hehe thanks!! :D

[burstoflight]

Awww that was AMAZING! I loved on Nate beat the shit out of Damien and how he stayed with Jenny all night! This is the stuff the show SHOULD have done.

Update soon! :)

[gnomess92]

thank you S! :P they should have instead of the 'sh**' they pulled on us NJers!

[mandycandy218]

this was amazing! it's the best chapter yet. I love how Rufus said that Nate is a super hero. He is such an NJ shipper :) Update soon!

[gnomess92]

thankiess! ;)

[naeham]

oops totally forgot to comment.. good job.. may I suggest serena being hit by an anvil?