Undisclosed Desires | Chapter Five

[gnomess92]

Comments

[burstoflight]

Wow this was great! I really like how Nate is questioning his feelings and Jenny is trying to hide hers from everyone but Nate. It's way more organic than the show tried to push. And Serena is much better written as well! I'm so glad Dan's there for her too! And J's right...DV is PLAIN WEIRD! LOL. Update soon!

[gnomess92]

thank you so much S! :D

[kellou24]

This chapter is great! Love how Serena is slowly going to cause their relationship to crumble with her petty fights. Even if they are justified. Update soon:D

[gnomess92]

thanks for readin! :D

[andiekook]

well, i need to be honest with you. at first i thought this story wouldnt turn out to be as good as the last one was (because i loved nate as a drug addict^^), but this chapter made me smile a lot! i loved it!

[gnomess92]

Thanks, its ok if ya dont enjoy this one as much as BTW, I just appreciate you readin! :D

[beccaira]

After a long long time I've finally found some time to log in here and there's this wonderful fiction of yours waiting for me... All I can say is I love it, it's really well written and yeah what can I say - wish the real episode would've been like this :) Plus I've missed the J-D interaction on the show so it's nice to see some of it here =)
Great job :)

[gnomess92]

Yay!! Thankies! ;)

hi

[moralesmarie]

good chapter update soon

Re: hi

[gnomess92]

thanks so much for reading! :)

[claudia_12]

Awwwww I loved all the Nate/Jenny interactions. I like how protective he is of her. :)

Serena needs to to die so that Nate and Jen could be together.
Is that going to happen in this story? Is serena going to die? :D

[gnomess92]

lmfao! there might be a death, whether its serena I cant say ;) they'll be an update soon! :D

[claudia_12]

Fine, I guess I'll settle for Damien's death. lol

I so can't wait for a new chapter!!! :)