Beyond The Words | Chapter 15

[gnomess92]

Comments

[kellou24]

Okay I'm not much of a reviewer but I just had to after reading that. I loved the chapter although I'm kinda disappointed that she's cheating on Liam. I really turned out to like him and no matter how much of a Nate/Jenny fan I'm kinda mad she cheated. I don't know. Anyway update soon.

[gnomess92]

Ok let me write Chapt 16 first before you get upset :) you gotta know though that NJ are endgame! <3

[always4ever95]

“- God, why are you doing this to me?!”
“Because you should be with me, because your first time…”,
“That should’ve been us.”

Oh my God, those lines made my cry! That’s what we need in the show- those lines! This chapter was freaking amazing!

[gnomess92]

Im happy you enjoyed it! This needs to happen on the show! :D xxx

[beccaira]

Woohoo absolutely loved this one :))
"...Nate gave in, throwing his bag down onto the dining table. “Fine, you really want to know?! It makes me physically sick seeing you with Liam. Seeing him with his hands all over you…”.."
this part was great, and the one always4ever95 mentioned.. oh but I'm wondering will she ever get to read the letter? ^^ I wanna "see" her reaction (actually while reading this part I could really imagine Tay and Chace acting...^^)Anyways like I said, this story's getting better and better with every new chapter!

[gnomess92]

yeah J will get to read it :P glad you enjoyed it hehehe chapter 16 comin soon! xx

[maelynn13]

I wonder how and if Liam will find out about N/J.

[gnomess92]

Hmm I wonder :)

[andiekook]

aw... that was some hot story line.. <3

[gnomess92]

thank you, chapter 16 soon :P xxxx