Beyond The Words | Chapter 23

[gnomess92]

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[starrlitsky]

wow that was lovely =D

[gnomess92]

Im glad you enjoyed it :D I dont think it's my best chapter! :/

[starrlitsky]

i enjoyed it,it needs more NJ time and dan warming up to the idea of them together

[gnomess92]

Ok :D

[gnomess92]

hehe :P

[etgoddess]

Ahhh, work sucks! I'm terrible for not getting back to this sooner! BUT, this is amazing. I was squealing out loud reading these chapters. The build-up to the "I love you" was excellent and I think my heart exploded at the sheer awesome of that moment. ;p I LOVE that he chased her down and made her listen instead of passively letting her get away. Also, telling Vanessa to GTFO. Woot. Fierce!Nate rocks my socks. Keep up the fantastic work!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

[burstoflight]

Did you hear that sound? It was Fanforum telling you to JOIN US.

Don't you want to be around when we hit 400 NJ threads which is going to be VERY VERY SOON? :)

[etgoddess]

Hahaha you win! ;p And yes I'm quite excited for the new layout!

[gnomess92]

your joining FF? :D x

[kellou24]

Vanessa is such a whore. I mean can't she take a hint. I guess you can't blame her for trying -Nate is gorgeous. Anyway great chapter! Loved Chuck apolagizing and of course Nate declaring his love for Jenny. About damn time. The only part I didn't like was Blair. I mean everyone else is over it why does she need to bitch about it anymore? Uh must be the insecurities she has. Update soon:)

[gnomess92]

I will :D

[naeham]

Finally! Lol loved it, was totally squeeing :) I loved that they said ILY in the rain . Blair needs to grow up really lol Nate running after jenny was awesome once again the the rain lol. Can't wait to read your next chapter :)

[gnomess92]

thank you N! :P