All for you, baby

Dec 31, 2006 15:50

            I’m going to die.

The phrase reverberated through Diana’s skull, hollowed of any emotion or thought, echoing itself in a never-ending round.  Shrilly, the memory of Eleanor’s harrowing news crept between the strains of the chorus (“The Germans have her, Diana.  There’s nothing anyone can do to help Meg now”), coupled with ( Read more... )

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pyratesss December 31 2006, 20:22:03 UTC
That was amazing! I'm so glad you decided to post this here. :x I've been waiting to read it, since I first heard you talking about it~ but yes, very well done. I just love your writing, it gets me every single time. And I think you did the smut just fine; I loved it, especially a semi-topping Meg. It was something I never thought I'd see, and it was h-o-t.

Then again, who are we kidding? As long as it's Diana/Meg, I adore it.

Wonderful job as always, and can't wait for your next piece. :3

P.S: “I was going to cut it out,” the red-head had explained as Meg’s finger traced the shadow of a deep gash in the soft flesh, “and bleed to death. I even thought about taking you with me, so he’d never touch you, but Martha found me before I finished.”

That broke my heart. There's something very poetic, and very beautiful, about that paragraph.

Or maybe I'm just insane, I don't know. But it was my favorite portion of the story.

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jinjojess December 31 2006, 21:43:21 UTC
You're not insane, it's one of my favorite parts too. I've always wondered what the hell was under that bandage, and for this piece I wanted Diana to share something intimate with Meg. Since sex isn't a big deal for her, I figured the bandage and the confidence were better.

Glad you liked! :3 And semi-topping Meg keeps the sex interesting, I think. :D

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agentmulder January 1 2007, 00:49:20 UTC
SO FUCKING GOOD.

diana fingering meg = yes.
buff meg manhandling diana = double yes.
diana hollowing out her own vagina = sad, very sad, but very yes at the same time.

my favourite part was the suggestion that diana played the tease many times before, and poor nazi meg was afraid to fall for it again. i love when you allude to past encounters between the girls, it gives it a whole new element of realism. and diana's pubic hair; i've always wanted to call her a firecrotch, and now i can.

the end is so bittersweet, too. i'm beginning to really believe that diana and meg just weren't meant to be. :(

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jinjojess January 1 2007, 01:15:06 UTC
Haha, thanks to the nth degree. :3 (Yes, I've adopted this smilie and will hold it hostage forever because it's adorable)

Nazi!Meg is hot, ain't she? I think she needs some fanart. Hint hint to people who can draw well.

LAWLZ @ firecrotch

I love when you find something in the story that I didn't really think about when writing and imbue it with extra meaning. When I'm writing fanfiction, I usually have constructed my own personal fanon that I use for detail work in stories, but yeah, I just realized how hot the implication that Diana's been teasing Meg sounds.

Apparently I'm staying over at Diana's tonight, but tomorrow at some point expect your Jenny/Di smut.

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