finally

[goatstack]

getting a story down is rough. i need to attack it one sentence at a time and stop worrying about the overall pace!

but i have a sort of first draft. thank goodness.

now lets just hope i pass this class. goodness knows what he expects.

edit: i say goodness wwaaay to much.

anyway ill be on here later with an update!!

Comments

[utopiarebel]

PACING IS SO IMPORTANT. It's so easy to get caught up in it too early, but it really is my favorite element of storytelling.

[goatstack]

Its a major part of the story, for sure.

I actually drank a lot of brandy last night and wrote this 'Johnny Got His Gun' rant... I'll have to post it if I decide to use it.