small poem

[god_damn_me_]

i'd hold my breath forever,
but breathing is an involuntary action.

Comments

[frererouge]

it needs a comma.

[frererouge]

this nis strange too becuase iwas reding your away message/aim prof and thinking "is meier trying to write poetry..." thne i looked here nad here we are!

[god_damn_me_]

how about that.

this one is not done but i like the lines.

i have about 30 more that i am compiling actually.