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goddamnedstars

Backseat - Sam/Dean (Supernatural)

Jun 19, 2006 13:21

Title: Backseat
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam/Dean
Word Count: 1,044
Rating: A hard R
Notes: Written for the drabble meme - mine is here (friends locked), where cordeaux requested B - Backseat (SPN - Sam/Dean). It's not really a drabble anymore. I got a little carried away. :-[ And it's probably not even half as graphic as she (or I) would have ( Read more... )

short story, dean/sam, finished, supernatural, drabble meme

Comments 31

inpurity July 1 2006, 21:08:47 UTC

Very very sexy.
It was not graphic, but it was WAY BETTER. It was all about suggesting the images in the reader's mind and it was excellent and sexy and darkly erotic, in its forbidden quality.
Excellent job, Jessamy. I loved it.
I am glad you are writing again.

quarterturn July 1 2006, 21:15:52 UTC

I'm glad it was good even without the graphic sex. I tend to have a hard time writing graphic scenes, so this works out well. :D

Thank you so much. I'm glad I'm writing again too, I've missed it. :)

badaddiction July 1 2006, 21:26:14 UTC

Holyshit.
I just read that at work. I started, thinking, "Oh, I'll just read the first few lines for a little taste then finish later".
Not. Possible.

Your writing? It's like coke. You can't have just one or two lines. You have to have the whole bag.
And then you have to sit very still for a few minutes hoping that your coworkers don't think you've gone insane because your breathing a little funny all of the sudden.
Because my coworkers are giving me some awfully strange looks right now.

I love it how you give us little pieces of things outside of the scope of the actual story. The line about the SATs for instance.
And somewhere between this piece and the last piece of yours that I read your voice found a whole new level of clarity.

goddamnedstars August 30 2006, 11:02:29 UTC

I am so sorry I haven't responded to this before! Honestly, this piece of feedback made me so happy, you have no idea. I really appreciate that you took time out to let me know what you thought, and I'm so glad you liked it. You are still one of my favorite writers, so anything coming from you is just like..aljdalksdfasdljf. :D

Thanks again hon.

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goddamnedstars August 30 2006, 11:03:33 UTC

Meep, I am so far behind on replying to comments. :-/ But anyway, yes, I hope this is kind of what you had in mind. It's not as graphic as you probably would have liked, but gosh, I chicken out when I get to that point and just kind of...blur it. :D

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quarterturn August 30 2006, 12:30:32 UTC

I have to agree with you. I won't pass up a graphic scene, but more often than not I'm left disappointed. There are just some words that should not be used in conjuction with the human body, especially during sex scenes. Very few people can seem to hit the balance between too technical and too...gross, I guess the word would be. I'm really glad this amount of detail worked for you. :)

You are way too kind, but thank you so much. :)

lover_youshould July 4 2006, 18:30:09 UTC

!!!

I don't even know these characters or anything about them but guh. ♥

goddamnedstars August 30 2006, 11:04:22 UTC

I am so far behind on replying. Sorry. :( But thank you so much for the comment, it made my day. ♥

serenity1990 August 1 2006, 20:55:53 UTC

This is by far one of my favorite writings of yours that I've read in a long time. It really was extremely awsome and I'm not just saying that.

goddamnedstars August 30 2006, 11:04:59 UTC

Heyyyyy, brother.

Thank you for the comment, seriously. It means a lot that you read it and enjoyed it. :)