the beginning of gina.

[goddamnthelight]

Gina Saidgina told me when i was young

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[dutchairplanes]

The word 'gloom' kind of bothers me, but I think this was magnificent.

[goddamnthelight]

actually that is exactly the thing about this one that i hate. i'm trying to think of a better way to phrase that. but thank you. thank you so very much.

[goddamnthelight]

p.s. i changed it tentatively to "comber" to stick to the ocean/water/waves theme, but i still don't think it fits.

[dutchairplanes]

It's perfect now.