Fic: Rebuilding the World Live Free or Die Hard fanfic 1/3

[goddess_of_7s]

Title: Act 1 Rebuilding the World

Comments

[sevter]

There were some spelling mistakes that threw me for a loop (one of the spelling mistakes was "personal" instead of "personnel" when the doctor was talking and "fail" instead of "flail

[goddess_of_7s]

First thank you so much for reviewing, especially constructive criticism. Sorry about Asoef, I thought I had double checked that but missed it

[sevter]

I kinda liked the viewpoints too. =P It is a bit of an abrupt shift the first time it happened. I think after a while, I got used to it.

About the bags thing...okay cool. I didn't realize that. The whole hospital thing just threw me off for a loop. I couldn't imagine her throwing them out of the hospital or anyone tagging the bags that way for the personnels. Thanks for clarifying.

-sevter-

[lelann137]

hmm, very interesting. i definately like how it takes time to rebuild, most every other fic i've read has life back to normal in like a day or two. poor matt, but at least he has lucy to talk things over with if he needs to. thanks for writing, and i hope you do write more

Finishing?

[macattack84]

I'm really starting to like this story, good based for a build up. When are you gonna finish it? I so want to read more.

Yay!!

[anonymous]

Aww this was so good!! Terrible cliff-hanger though!! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens ^.-

[msofdarkness]

Hey there!
Just stumbled across this fic...Any plans to finish it? or is it finished somewhere else?