Fic: The Inner Child 1/8

[goddess_of_7s]

Title: The Inner Child 1/8
Author: Goddess_of_7s
Summary: A tow-headed child walks into the clinic and House runs into his most interesting case yet.
Warnings: None. Seriously.
Rating: PG
AN: This the first story in a series based in the Universe that I’m laying out in this story. Set in season 1-2

Comments

[_tallian_]

I like this! I'll definitely be checking out the next installment. Love the House voice.

BTW, did you mean to have numbers after the Aussie-speak? Dero1, bingle2 etc.

[goddess_of_7s]

Icon love!

Thanks! Sometimes I re-read the stuff I wrote, and I really can't believe that I wrote that! Seriously, (not tootin' my horn here) I don't know how I wrote some of it and wonder if I was like OD'ed on House and channelling him or something!

Anyway I can't believe that I forgot the Aussie explanation. Here's what I added at the bottom (thanks for reminding me)

1 Dero-homeless man
2 bingle-car accident
3 ambo-ambulance

[_tallian_]

Thanks! Nicked from equanimity23. It seemed appropriate for the subject matter. Hee.

*is off to comb your lj for fic*

Thanks for the Aussie glossary, it helps greatly.

[halfdoomed]

Just a suggestion, but the numbers after the slang confused me. What you could try doing is putting the words in italics (like my friends do with their Japanese in anime fanfics) or maybe even the number in parenthesis. Following the word directly threw me off.

That said, this is really good and I would love to see where this goes. I hope you don't mind if I add you to follow this in the future!

[goddess_of_7s]

Well, I had it formatted as foot notes, but I can never remember how to do that in lj. Italics as always meant something else to me. Perhaps if I put a key at the beginning of the story. I shall think on it. Thansk for the advice!

[halfdoomed]

Sure thing! I'm not sure how to do footnotes on LJ either, no worries. :)

[lucifers_toy]

I loved it. I'm looking forward to how you explain the reverting to childhood thing. Lol I gotta say, i'm Australian and the only slang I knew was 'ambo'

[goddess_of_7s]

Yeah i was told that some of it is very out of date...but what can you do? Glad you did like it!

[the_mad_fangirl]

I love this kind of thing - mixing a fact based series with magical realism. Can't wait for more.

[goddess_of_7s]

wait til you see the explaination for the whole thing....