Planning

[godoflaundry]

Title: Planning
Rating: G
Genre:  Gen
Spoilers: none
Warnings: none
Word Count: ~2000
Summary:  Peter can tell that Neal is up to something. Now it's simply a matter of figuring out what it is before Neal gets into trouble.

Comments

[sholio]

Awww, I liked this. :) It's really sweet -- I liked the emotional whiplash between thinking the two of them were at odds, to finding out what's really going on. Neal utilizing Peter's guilt at spying on him to keep him from asking questions is particularly clever of him. And I really like the way that they are both able to roll with the changes, from trust to distrust and back again.

[godoflaundry]

Hehe. Thanks!

They always talk about how well Peter knows Neal, but I think Neal has a pretty good idea of how Peter thinks as well. Plus he's already awesome at reading people from being a conman.

Anyways. I'm glad you enjoyed :D

[daria234]

:) thanks for sharing, I LOVE that June chews him out as part of the plan. ha

[godoflaundry]

Hehe. Yeah. June totally could kick butt. She just lets the boys do it for her sometimes :D

[noiproksa]

You had me wondering what Neal was up to, as well *g*. This was a great and well executed idea. Really sweet and I can totally see them react the way they did here.

[godoflaundry]

:D I'm glad you enjoyed!

[tinnuial]

Haaa I totally loved how Peter knew Neal was Up To Something and how everyone (especially Hughes and June!) was in on it! Great little story :D Thanks for sharing!

[godoflaundry]

Hehe. Yeah. I like the idea of Peter's Neal-sensor going off for something innocent like this. :D

Thanks for the nice review!

[ladydragoness]

This is great! And, yes, Peter does sometimes overuse the prison card. A wonderfully executed plan, it could not get any better. I love it.

[godoflaundry]

Thanks! :D Glad you enjoyed. hehe