My Eyes at Normandy

Apr 07, 2003 19:33

Shadowed words on white-washed stones ( Read more... )

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thespectacle April 9 2003, 20:43:08 UTC
i like the first stanza. =) it draws the picture, yet provides a bit of ambiguity for the reader to paint in. could be a little more ambiguous? ambiguity allows for the reader/viewer to play and participate; no play, no way ( ... )

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