Fic: Sex, Fries and Videotape (Logan/Veronica) NC-17 1/2

[annie_oakley]

Title: Sex, Fries and Videotape (1/2)
Author: annie_oakley
Pairing: Logan/Veronica
Word Count: 4200
Rating: PG-13 for this part, NC-17 for part 2 (for sex and language)
Summary: This is a sequel to Sexual Jealousy Issues, which I wrote for the Lost in the Dark Challenge at gogetem_bobcat. Another day, another case.
Spoilers: Up to the 3.20 finale
Warnings: This is the

Comments

[seluciav]

This is seriously fabulous -- like WOAH. I love just about everything you've ever written and this is no exception! You've done a great job with the subtle things that really give the story it's flavor: the way Veronica doesn't want to upset the fragile peace at the beginning; the way she finds ways to do what Logan's been asking for (helping her with cases) but in a way that isn't exactly what he asked for (because god forbid she actually give in on something like that); acknowledging her tendancy to jump to conclusions on a minimal amount of information. All of those small touches really give this story the perfect tone and make it feel like a part of the show. Not to mention that you've got such a great Logan voice, and a really accurate way of portraying things from Veronica's POV. :-)

And the ending was already hot so I cannot WAIT for part 2!!! CAN. NOT. WAIT.

[havemy_heart]

I'm glad their rekindled relationship is going well. I'm concerned about Veronica's state of mind to actually decide she wants to videotape them, though. That's so not her. I know she's been giving it a lot of thought, and maybe it's a way of dealing with her issues, but it makes me nervous. I look forward to seeing how the rest of this plays out.

I did love that she brought Disney movies for them to watch :) That's too awesome. And I don't blame Veronica at all for getting distracted by Logan and appreciating all of his attributes. If he were my boyfriend, I'd spend the time we weren't in bed together just staring at him ;D

[afrocurl]

I should feel bad about reading this at work, but I don't.

There's something about the way in which Veronica turned her thoughts around--from thinking that all sex-tapes were bad to wanting to share something like that with Logan--that I find really symbolic of what the last years in Neptune have done to her.

[celtic_flicka]

I can't wait for part 2!

[annegables]

Fun! Looking forward to the next part!