Fic: Marshmallow Fluff (Logan/Veronica) (NC-17)

[myalias88]

Title: Marshmallow Fluff
Author: myalias88
Pairing: Logan/Veronica

Rating: NC-17

Spoilers: Set during the summer after 2x22.

Word Count: 3,552

Summary: All cynicism and glass half-emptiness aside for once - maybe there was something good underneath the debris of ruined lives and bloodshed…something worthwhile, worth saving.

Disclaimer: I don’t own

Comments

[doniczka]

Woo Hoo!!!I'm gone for few days-yes,I know,the worst days in your life-and when I come back THIS greets me?Man,I must've been a REALLY good bad girl*grins*
I loved it,like really really to x infinity and then some more(I love our insane arguments,which btw I always win:P),lol.It's a perfect combo of cute,hot and you even managed to put some issue working in here.Like I told you yesterday,I love the whole 'I-don't-love-him-only-I-do' thing,oh Veronica Veronica Veronica,we KNOW you better than you do,lol.Naturally the sex was uh la la.Loved it!

Okay,now I second Annie,new chapter of WSaT like right now!!!:D

[myalias88]

Yes, those days w/o you were terrible. *obligatory eye roll* :p Glad you liked it, you should leave more often, I'm more productive, lol.

I'm working on it.

[love_is_epic]

Oh my... I love this so much!! I don't think I stopped grinning like an idiot throughout the whole thing. You have such a wonderful gift for detail... I felt like I was right there with them on the beach. And I know it's probably silly but this was one of my favorite parts:

Hoping to silence him, Veronica had shoved a piece of chocolate in that sarcastic mouth of his. He looked amused as he chomped away. “Shh, don’t ruin the moment,” her tone was playful but her stare conveyed an edge of sincerity.

Logan held her gaze. “Wouldn’t dream of it, Mars.” He bent down and dropped a tiny Eskimo kiss to her little, wind chilled nose before lacing their fingers together. “Wouldn’t dream of it.”^Just this little tidbit of a scene made my heart flutter....you could almost see the intimacy despite both Logan and even more so Veronica's attempts at avoiding the characterization of their relationship. That's the thing I love most about LoVe. There really never has to be any words, although they are nice, too, their actions, mannerisms, eyes

[myalias88]

Glad the fluffiness made you grin. :D

And thanks for letting me know your fave parts, that's always fun. :)

Thank you for reading and a big thanks for the awesome comment!

[celtic_flicka]

So sweet! (No pun intended.) And I loved your ending.