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[gogoangelgunboy]

Gerritt drives until the headlights and streetlights start blurring together and he knows he has to pull in somewhere before he wrecks the pick-up. Once he's got the motel-room door locked, he kicks his boots off and lies down in his clothes; the adrenaline high that's got him this far's fading, and he's tired enough that he's starting not to care

Comments

[moonriddler_mim]

that is really cool! he feels like a rough and tough type of guy. I think I like him despite what he's done. ^^ more?

[pariahsdream]

This I could see the intro to a book. I am intrigued and it's a great opening that makes me want to know more. You have such a great command of sparse language. <3

[chris_king_2005]

Have I told you lately how entirely awesome you are?