I don't think that's slow or plodding etc. Looks like an interesting start! I have no experience with screenwriting/-reading unless the pantomime I wrote a couple of years ago counts, and I don't think it does so I can't really comment usefully: but I'm sure it'll be a good experience for you to cut back on all that elegant prose for a while and handle only the bare bones of plot and dialogue.
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