Fic: Do You Realize That Moment When You Turn Around?

Sep 09, 2011 02:59

Title: Do You Realize That Moment When You Turn Around?
Fandom: Big Bang and Beast
Pairing: GRi and GDHyunseung
Note: This is a companion fic for Empires Rise and Fall, a story that I posted some months ago. It is crucial that you read the first part (The Prince)  for you to understand the second (The Duke).

The Prince: There was this one night where Read more... )

gri, alternate universe, big bang

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vvipforseungri September 8 2011, 20:07:44 UTC
This one was just as beautiful as the other one, maybe even more so. I remember reading Empire a long time ago, so I was excited to see that you've written a sequel. Memming this...

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gogothgirl September 9 2011, 10:39:09 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, i saw your comment when i went to grab the link before i posted this. :) you've been pretty active in the GDheartRi comm, haven't ya? XD good thing, that. keep it up! :)

I'm glad that you think that its as beautiful as the prequel. i've been so worried about messing up this verse DX i'm very honored that you're memming this <3

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semianna September 8 2011, 23:44:45 UTC
I assume you meant for me to do this too :) but I didn't expect the new installation to be up so soon :D
The end was so beautiful and interesting. I really enjoy the switching back and forth between the two different worlds and, yes, it made perfect sense! I also enjoy how you switched the main universe in this story for a slightly different slant. The end of both stories were so powerful (with Seungri falling and rising) but in this one where the two JIyongs communicate it's just so poignant and interesting. The only question I have is, who is Hyunseung in the royalty universe? Or are we not supposed to know...
Anyways, once again: AWESOME.

also, I love the music choice for this hehe

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gogothgirl September 9 2011, 10:48:40 UTC
nothing ever slips past you, eh? quick to catch on. lol.

i was going for a different approach with our Jiyongs, really. where the Seungris are very welcoming to the idea, the Jiyongs would have some mistrust and -for the Duke- ignore the other for as long as they can. ah, Hyunseung. pretty, lovely Hyunseung. He's Ri's half brother, but since he came from a mistress instead of the Queen (obviously since he's only half XD) he's referred to as the bastard. however, for a reason or another, Ri's father had Hyunseung raised as a Prince with Ri but he can never have any claim to the throne. Since in medieval time the custom is that the Bastard can never inherit anything from his/her father, Jiyong thinks that he 'saved' Hyunseung by giving him the highest title he can think of which is his consort. twisted medieval politic is twisted, okay XD

ah, the music. its Shannon LaBrie and the title is Calls Me Home. lovely, isn't it? i heard it on one of the Game of Thrones fanmade vid on youtube.

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ngoclienluong September 9 2011, 08:54:28 UTC
hi, i was recently going through the older posts in gdheartri when i saw Empires Rise and Fall and i fell in love with it !
then all of a sudden i saw the sequel to it, which i loved too :)
its so good, but my heart totally broke for Seungri :( anyways, do you mind of i add you ?

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gogothgirl September 9 2011, 10:53:12 UTC
really? well then. i'm very lucky that you came across Empires and liked it enough to suffer through the sequel XD i dont know what is it with me and torturing Seungri. i just can't help it. -le shrug- oh, please, go ahead and add me :)

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crazy_ryzz September 9 2011, 10:14:33 UTC
Oh my God.
I red both parts and... I don't even know where to start.
I loved the music you choose, they fit perfectly and I almost cried! So beautiful and...beautiful! I just loved the Prince, it was so heartbreaking and all. And in this, I totally adored the way you made both Jiyongs interact. Loved these to the pieces. ;w;
Awesome.
<3 <3

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gogothgirl September 9 2011, 10:55:50 UTC
YOU'RE awesome, okay XD

thank you for reading! i'll work harder so that you *do* cry the next time you read any of my Gri ;D
yeah, okay not a very nice thing to say. -headdesk-

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41551947105 September 9 2011, 13:19:36 UTC
This is probably the closest to perfection a fic can get ;_; <3

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gogothgirl September 9 2011, 14:02:47 UTC

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