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[goingisntgood]

Slowly but surely move towards the stage

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[master_buns]

Guns pointed as friends are playing our roles
Stocking up on reasons and plausable hipsters and foes

Thats good. Work with the wording on the first sentance, but not too much, just like order and pronouns and stuff.

[goingisntgood]

i really appreciate how you respond to what i write, i take alot of that into consideration!