Hero

[gokulex59]

Weekly Challenge #1 Write a story or a scene featuring your bias x your least fave member OR member you have most trouble writing.
Title: Hero
Pairing: Xiu Min x D.O
Rating: T
Genre: Character Study
Length: 2 686
Summary: Kyungsoo is the ideal personality Minseok wants to have, Kyungsoo is everything Minseok wants to be.
Warnings: Shitty ending

Comments

[sheisjoanne]

wow.
Seriously, wow.

This was so amazing I don't even know what to say. I truely believed until the end that Kyungsoo was real - well, he is, in a very odd way.
I couldn't stop reading it and it was so great. The idea was brilliant. Wow, I really, really loved this.

Keep writing, please!

[gokulex59]

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU because I thought I dropped too much hints into the parts that Kyungsoo isn't real and this would be a complete fail and your comment plastered a shit-eating grin on my face to be honest.

[kfangirl4]

I re-read this story twice because I realized that I'm living Minseok's life. Every night I fall asleep with my characters (really my iPad) on top of me. My characters keep me from quitting my crappy job (at least Minseok's job pays well). And my characters are who I wish I was.

This was so good I am in awe *kneeling to give most honored bow*

[gokulex59]

And I re-read this comment twice because you must be a soul sister or something because this is exactly how I am when I write a non-fanfiction story too.

No don't bow I feel awkward against bows I don't know what to doooo.

[vanicola]

the timid, naïve boy died somewhere on India shores;

feel like this is the most gorgeous line in this beast of a fic tbh. a little depressed but not at the same time (bc i saw it coming) that kyungsoo isn't real but i seemed to have lied to myself throughout the majority of the thing, trying to tell myself that this do kyungsoo wasn't a mere character, but like.. a real person
or something

[gokulex59]

So I DID give enough hints for Kyungsoo not to be a real character. Good.

[donawhalee]

I like how Kyungsoo brings spark to minseok's life and cries this is really good. So many things are happening and the pace is really fast, i find myself getting lost hahah but it's meant be like that isn't it? and I SPOT TAO hahahahah. i really like this fic alot;~;

[gokulex59]

You're the first one who noticed Zitao there come here I'mma hug you for a reward.

Well, there is only so much you can describe Minseok and Kyungsoo's relationship without revealing Kyungsoo is not real, so it kinda had to be fast paced.