All Those Broken Spaces - PG - YunJae

Dec 23, 2010 14:26

Title: All Those Broken Spaces (part of the Everyday Chronicles)
Length: One Shot. (2,078 words)
Author: Guu.
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance
Summary: Jaejoong feels lonely and decides he'll indulge his slefishness for tonight.

Quick A/N: Hi everyone :) just a quick note to let you all know that I've decided to make a new small series of fics clled " ( Read more... )

everyday chronicles, one shot

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itsjeswee December 24 2010, 02:54:08 UTC
Beautifully heartbreaking. I mean, i just read an interview with JYJ whether they still contact Yunho and Changmin. The trio said they haven't contacted the two again. *sobs*
But i love your writing, as always.

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hana_kiree December 24 2010, 03:07:15 UTC
Aahhh, I'm falling in love with this universe... heck, I'm already in love with this. I don't know whether it's my own wishful thinking, but I like to read sthg like this... not so much of love triumphs it all, but normal, daily occurences in life like this. They might not be able to be together 24/7 like how they used to, but that doesn't lessen the love. Instead, trying to appreciate small moments like spending 5 minutes together, or small chats over the phone. In short, this universe is perfect, however imperfect the couple featured as of now with all the restrictions imposed on them. Do write more please... I can't wait for the next installment already.

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rethzneworld December 24 2010, 04:35:45 UTC
Yuho and jaejoong loves each other so much~ XD

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hi_yu December 24 2010, 05:14:46 UTC
*sobbing*. this is so perfect.
so real..
*sobbed*..
YunJae was real and is still are...
love them, love you.
hwaiting

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am3thyst December 24 2010, 07:17:46 UTC
Oh this was so awesome. Your characterization of Jaejoong is spot on - he's so emotional, and yet tries to hard to stifle his emotions sometimes. I'm glad that Yunho knows him so well here.

The man holds back too much and barely knows when to let go. This always results in days like this, in which he'll let out everything at once, hoping somebody will catch him when he falls.

Best line ever, seriously. You summarized Jaejoong and YunJae so perfectly in those two sentences. Memming this for sure!

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