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oflights October 12 2011, 02:45:20 UTC
djsadjkljlks YOU DID IT. okay, I don't have time to read this now but I AM SO EXCITED. YAY!

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oflights October 15 2011, 05:38:27 UTC
JULIA. I love you, seriously. this was so delightful and silly and wonderful. jealous and bratty!Mark was freaking adorable to me, and Duuuuustin. he entertained the hell out of me the whole way through. his and Chris' relationship felt really natural and fitting to me, and I love the miscommunication going on there. it was almost more tragic than Mark and Eduardo and their obliviousness, because it was like, so close!!

also, this: “Sorry, and um-I’m really happy for you, and I’m gonna let you finish, but-could you-?” lolll did you just have Eduardo quote Kanye, or was that an accident?

but yeah, the getting together scenes! for both of them, but I especially loved Mark and Eduardo's, unf unf unf. they needed that sort of non-verbal shoving themselves at each other, and the kissing was really sweet and hot. and the last scene!! dying at the swallow line, omg.

this was so so so excellent! it just made me smile a whole lot. XD

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goldendoods October 20 2011, 20:14:14 UTC
ALLIE ♥ I'm so glad you liked it. Yes the Kanye thing was intentional /o\ And yes, the whole thing was just a bunch of tragic misunderstanding. Stupid stupid boys.

Thanks so much bb ILU and your praise always means so much ♥

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syrika182 October 12 2011, 05:52:20 UTC
God, Julia. You know how I've been reacting, but OH MY GOD.

I JUST.

THINGS I CAN'T: EVEN.

You made me supernova and flail and now I'm a nebula. I'm the Tara Nebula, and I'm just floating around, stars in my eyes and planets forming in my stomach or however the fuck space works, I'm too happy to even look it up.

Just... AGH. SO MUCH JOY. I ALMOST BROKE MY PEN BECAUSE OF IT.

And the NECK PORN. YOU WRITE IT SO FABULOUSLY.

In short: I love you. Come here, let me hug you, I have to squeeze you because I love you so much.

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goldendoods October 20 2011, 20:18:42 UTC
TARAAA. YOU ARE THE MOST WONDERFUL. *hugs* Your comments always make me grin so much. And of course hearing your reactions was super amusing, heeeee. Thanks babe ♥

(Re: neck porn--ALWAYS.)

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mannerspolice October 12 2011, 06:21:39 UTC
I just melted everywhere.
I had to leave this comment here so I could go reread the ending a couple of times.
AUGH! SO GOOD.

Let me tell you, I discovered the existence of this fic and then immediately had to go to a meeting and the idea of Chris and Eduardo dating was distracting me the WHOLE TIME. Maybe someone should explore this pairing in greater detail... XD

BUT THIS WAS SO GOOD. I really especially loved all the references to Chris' flawlessness and I loved how Eduardo was a MESS. SO GOOD!

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goldendoods October 20 2011, 20:22:26 UTC
Thank you thank you thank you babe! :D So happy you liked. Chris is obviously flawless and everyone knows it, and as for Eduardo, you're right but I think you mean HOT mess gurl. LOLLL

(If someone wanted to explore Chris/Wardo in greater depth I would mostly certainly not complain...just saying...)

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goldendoods October 20 2011, 20:22:46 UTC
Thank YOUUUU baby! ♥

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arcadianmaggie October 12 2011, 13:08:14 UTC
I loved it! Thank you!! :)

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goldendoods October 20 2011, 20:23:10 UTC
I'm so glad. Thanks for commenting :)

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