Part 4.5 of the CAA fanfic - I'm going to go get a life now.

May 15, 2009 16:06


Part 4, second half.

Author's notes: Okay, so I lied. I got the second part done today, so I may as well post it (I was half done with it when I posted the first half). I hope it doesn't seem too rushed, but I had to get all my ideas down before they flew away. :\  But, if this does seem rushed, please let me know.

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fusakugyoku May 16 2009, 06:29:39 UTC
PFFFFFFT Must kill the smiling. Must kill the smiling XD

Yey, Nate got his pasta bread bowl. I have to try that...

Also whooooo I'm in this!! But is "loud and squealing" the first thing you think of me? DDDD:

(Also, I only call Tsukkie "Tsukkie," never Lucky XD)

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gene_d42 May 16 2009, 17:21:23 UTC
I think this is my favourite chapter (or half-chapter) so far.

I did notice a few minor mistakes though:

"Oh and Lucky, called Jamie for me, I promised him a chopper." -Unless he's not talking to Lucky, but I'm asuming he is.

And that was they end of it at that time

Looking forward to more. XD

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bigsleepj May 18 2009, 18:15:39 UTC
Heheh. I like the cliff hanger. :-D

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randomanonym June 22 2009, 01:26:17 UTC
heehee~ I'm in this as an adventurous agent in HAWAII <-- beautiful place it is, but very expensive too. funfunfun~

XD oh noes Nate!
time to keep reading~ *whistles*

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