Was challenged to baby fics so here goes.
My sister made me a challenge so here goes
Here goes, mini ficcies. None of these characters are mine, goddamn it!
A little bit scary.
Batman was in the middle of a battle with Ivy when it happened.
He was in the process of breaking free from some rather grabby vines when two people spoke.
“I think he needs to be a little more friendly, don’t you my ( Read more... )
Here goes, mini ficcies. None of these characters are mine, goddamn it!
A little bit scary.
Batman was in the middle of a battle with Ivy when it happened.
He was in the process of breaking free from some rather grabby vines when two people spoke.
“I think he needs to be a little more friendly, don’t you my ( Read more... )
Comments 1
*huggles you extremely hard*
If you don't post these somewhere, I'll be really sad. I'm loving on them hard. I didn't stop giggling for several minutes.
Enjoying too much to beta properly, but I should try.
OK, here goes.
'Of all people why did it have to be Guy Gardner.' Question mark. Also, comma after people.
'He turned to glare at Ivy but she had already disappeared leaving only the sound of her laughter behind' comma after disappeared.
'Holding the Lantern off with one hand he tapped his com and called for aid. ' comma after hand.
'Seeing them Guy turned quickly' comma after them.
'Bruce just shrugged at Hal and turned to leave, wasn’t his problem anymore' New sentence for wasn't.
'Seems Guy was trying even harder now, snuggling as well as cuddling.' Maybe 'it seemed like' instead of 'Seems'
'Wont hurt him or anyone else' Apostrophe in won't.
*deep breath* OK, next one.
'He glanced at Dick pimp get-up, well maybe there were some good sides to it.' This sentence is the only one that needs work. 'Dick's'. ( ... )
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