Next three and whoa did I beat the total of 600 words today, that last one isn't really a snippet, damned bunny demanded to be written in full even though I didn't actually intend to write pron in it. Oh well. I'm sure you wont mind. Send me my next set soon please and I'll try to do them this w/e.
Fatherhood
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Fatherhood: Very cute. Booster's reaction was nicely done- panic right up until he realises how it could be good for him :)
Lip of Hell: I hope what you were trying to do was creep the fuck out of me, cos it worked. Dick was scary. But I can totally see this happening...
Purrfect: Nice characterisation. I especially liked 'all hard, solid muscle and attitude'- it's very Guy :) I can do nothing else but applaud the pron. The bits with the tail are very nice :D But isn't it a bit late for them to panic about the cameras? Barn door, horse, people. You realise that you *have* to post this somewhere, yes?
Um, haven't really done a lot on my snippets yet. Don't yell at me :( I'll try to get them up today...
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a few more comments like this and I might get my tired little butt back into gear and write some more
btw how did you find me?
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I'm pretty sure I found you on speedsicle :) and from there I have been lurking around your page, reading!
I just love all your little stories, sometimes I wish there was more to them - but I think it actually works best where you leave them :D
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