Just You and Me I

Apr 12, 2009 07:53

Series: Remedy
Chapter Title: Just You and Me I (4/9)
Word Count: 1427 ... aish
Pairing: Yoochun/Changmin,
Genre: Action, romance, angst
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: If I owned DBSk, Junsu wouldn't be with in 30 feet of Yoochun or I'd tell Jaejoong
Summary: Au. Drug dealers. prostitutes. Murder. Adult-napping.
Dedication:To all my bbs, you guys are ( Read more... )

chaptered, series: remedy, yoomin, yoochun, fanfiction

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Comments 17

mumbles April 12 2009, 12:55:21 UTC
They finally did it all that sexual tension bb! 8D 8D
got to develop your smut writing so just keep on writing and it'll be good 8D

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gompi April 12 2009, 21:17:11 UTC
Thank you so much for the comment (:

Yes I will pratice on Yoomin (:

Glad you enjoyed it

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lady_akira April 12 2009, 12:57:38 UTC
i think you managed to write smut pretty well :))

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gompi April 12 2009, 21:15:03 UTC
aww thank you

I was totally unconfident but then I got all these comments

(: thank you

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lady_shira32 April 12 2009, 13:02:51 UTC
SpOT-o bebe!~ Oooh, there's smut here? Yeah, lol i just home from hearing Easter Sunday massXDD

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lady_shira32 April 12 2009, 16:06:36 UTC
this pace where he hasn’t had sex in weeks and worse was living with one of the most fuckable beings he’s ever laid his eyes on.
Ack, now that is just plain torture. XDD

"whoremones."LOL.

The YooMin dry humping is soo awesome. It made me :Q____.
I love the semi-romantic smex in the bedroom. It's rough and hard, yet I find it sweet around the edges.IDK XD

“Will you shut the fuck up? I got you a boy friend for you not to walk into my house at such early hours.” Junsu ignores him and goes to the sleeping Yoochun. “You think he’ll be able to walk today?”

*FLAPS ALL AROUND THE ROOM*
the smut is okay, bb. It's hot, and I have to go take a shower now so I can sleep comfortably and dream of this chapter. :P

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gompi April 12 2009, 21:19:04 UTC
Yeah I had to emphasizethe whole Chun's not getting lucky fact (:

I love the humping (:

Very happy you enjoyed this chapter

Sleep well and sweet dreams (:

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pawshingo April 12 2009, 15:05:21 UTC
Changmin is so aggressive! Likes how he asks rather demands from Yoochun what he wants and later asks 'you, ok sweetheart?' *melts*

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gompi April 12 2009, 21:21:27 UTC
Yeah Changmin sucks at romance

thanks for the comment (:

*puts in bucket* Try to solidify so peole don't walk over you (:

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kireny April 12 2009, 18:04:53 UTC
I think you did the smut very well.

i really liked it! aw the yoomin~

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gompi April 12 2009, 21:21:59 UTC
Thank you so much

I'm glad you enjoyed it

I tried my best (:

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