First LJ Fic

[gomps]

Knowing Someone
By Gomp

Random Drabble- Takes place at the end of series, dismissing the movie. Ed did find a way home and now lives with the Rockbells. Winry and Ed are both 20.

Word Count- 768
EdXWinI don’t own Fma

Comments

[onee_omi]

Aww it's so cute and sad at the same time! ;_;/^_^ It made me giggle and just go "aww" Nice job ^^ yay for EdWin!! :D

[goddess_emily]

I like it a lot. It is cute but also sad. That is sad that Al and Ed are trying to learn more about each other b/c Al wasn't the same as before. I also think it is sad that Ed and Winry were becoming different people and didn't know each other as well as they used too. I liked the story a lot!

[camudekyu]

This has style. Distinct, original, creative, and IC. Perhaps a grammatical oops here and there, but nothing that interrupted the flow. Besides that, I really liked this. I thought it was incredibly Edward to expect Winry to remain the same after so many years, like it never occurred to him that she might grow up without him. Great job. XD

[theydontloveyou]

"i thought it was incredibly edward to expect winry to remain the same after so many years, like it neer occured to him that she might grow up without him."

totally ditto.

btw, that concept was sweet, original (at least in fanfiction), and nicely drawn out :)

[m3y0]

Aww! This is such a cute story. And it's wonderful how you pieced it all together too. <3 Just the right amount of sadness and fluff.

[evil_little_dog]

Very sweet story. I love the wistfulness mixed in with it; so like a guy, to think that the girl's just gonna remain the same. Really nice job.